Reviews for Harry Potter, et al, and the Keystone Council
her-my-own chapter 59 . 7/30
Awesome story! I hope to see more.
One small criticsome of the spells used in the first and second year are too advanced. They wouldn't have taught them yet unless Chaser or Spellforged passed it along from early tutoring
Keronshara chapter 57 . 7/22
The scene with Marigold & Sirius talking about her Harry's death was definitely a tearjerker. *mutters about stupid, mean authors that make their readers cry*
Keronshara chapter 59 . 7/22
After reading "Who Dares Wins", which was updated 5 months more recently than this fic, I had to read another of your unfinished stories that's gone over a year without updates. I swear I'll never learn.

This is a very interesting story so far. I've never come across anything like this story idea before. The closet thing I can think of is if the Spider-verse movies (or other multi-verse storylines) tuned-in to each other's frequencies without having the portals/breaches that occur in those stories. It makes me very curious where this story idea came from.
Keronshara chapter 38 . 7/21
Error: You have Chaser's Hogwarts run by HeadMISTRESS Dumbledore not HeadMASTER.
Keronshara chapter 17 . 7/21
The things out of left field - are they out of left field for you, the readers, or both? [I'm told cheeky, unpredictable characters is the treasure and bane of every fiction writer.]
Guest chapter 59 . 7/6
Hello. I have just found your writing, branching off from Clell's stuff. I have been enjoying it very much, particularly the "Inside" trilogy. The high quality of the workmanship (with added kudos to the workwomanship of your illustrious beta), unique characterizations, complexity, and the total lack of apology for your expectation that the reader have a brain and use it all come together to make you one of my happiest fanfiction discoveries in years.

Thank you for writing: it is my sincere hope that you are well and that someday this particular saga will continue.

Yours in admiration,


Please forgive the anonymous nature of this review. I have completely forgotten my login info for this site and felt an urgency to comment that precluded going through the recovery process.
Snorkelstrap chapter 7 . 7/8
I’m sure this has been pointed out ad nauseum, but whisk(e)y can only be called scotch if it is distilled, aged and bottled in Scotland. Not Gloucester.
lasslowerence chapter 2 . 5/31
Reaaaalllyy, a fucking thousand students in this fucking school and "oh no, hermione is nice, lets make her an ally, because WHY NOT FOLLOW EVERYONE", sorry, just ranting but i hate her so much, why try to make things different if u are going to make them relate to the same people as usual, ugh
anon chapter 59 . 4/27
One of my favorite complex HP Aus. Really individual characters, I am w9ndering about that unburnt diary. The sisters & brothers, the caregivers, the schoolmates, the teachers, are all beautifully drawn and layered. The humor is funny and well paced. The suspense & intrigue are well sketched. Descriptions 9f places & scenes are lucious.
Lilly1127 chapter 1 . 1/12
I just reread this and it was amazing the second time around as well! I hope you add more!
khatre chapter 22 . 12/21/2022
sooo .. Who is ultimately at Fault?
Dumbledore (intentionally or accidentally) created the wards that led to the abuse of Harry
but not All of that was the wards and the Dursleys have some level of .. responsibility .. for thier actions
No One took the ability to choose Right from Wrong from eithe Albus or the Dursleys ...
Both ALWAYS had the ability to Choose.
khatre chapter 20 . 12/21/2022
"they are slimy snakes" was Always dumb IMHO but ...
there were Reasons that the Entire Inquisitorial Squad was Slytherin ..
and that sooo soooooo many Death Eaters were Slytherin...
GenieM chapter 59 . 12/17/2022
Shards...what happens next?
GenieM chapter 5 . 12/15/2022
This is shaping up good!
Guest chapter 59 . 12/5/2022
***Psst: Your last update of this story was OVER A YEAR AGO...end Psst***
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