Reviews for Harry Potter, et al, and the Keystone Council |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Even though I believe in some stories where Ginny is a villain in later life, this Ginny is the on that I always feel sorry for. If the compulsion on the Gaunt Ring was so strong that it got Dumbledore, you can't blame Ginny for writing in the diary. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good drama and alternate character beats. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continuing to enjoy very much. Thanks for your efforts and crafting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good drama and balance with the characters to follow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Having a door that you can lock, and knowing you live in a magic house and can do your homework or try something you read about is a big plus. And food. It really can be seen as too little too late, or a partial good thing. I like that you can explore different reactions to this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The plural clue seems to be for us readers and the multiple Harrys instead of Ragnorok. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, okay. People are guessing about Joseph Hillyer who had many generations of squibs in his family tree before becoming a "full magical" again? Guesses then are disowned squibs from UK and European houses mixing back together. He's probably got two or three house names we've heard before back in his family tree. Well, and also the author's avatar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you're fine without a Hufflepuff Harry for this one as you have the Bones family to represent Hufflepuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter and thanks for your author's note. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good challenge, that their link may be observed. Perhaps Potter magic allowing the Regent to listen in? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good drama and follow-up. I like how Harry S is also getting helpful information for the others. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So unless the person who sent the cloaks also talks to inter-dimensional people, a likely sender of the coats would be Remus Lupin who was suspected and may not have confidence in himself to be around. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good switching. Including the mystery of how Rose found out about family distillery already to be able to give her gifts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Curious and interesting plot and character problems. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good reveals. |