|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Pie Maker|
| Harmonica Smile chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
This is wilder_rrose from reddit. I don’t know the Pushing Daisies source material or the other sources that well either, though of course I’ve read HP and seen a few of the SW movies. I like the throwaway humour in this line (clause), “while not brandishing light sabers or chasing cosmic outlaws through dangerous asteroid fields.” Yes, mighty warriors should develop their interests to become more well-rounded! Lol. BTW, don’t forget to post this in “What did you post Wednesdays?” When it rolls around.
| alcyonejonquil chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
I haven't read that many X-overs, but yours seems really interesting already! Merging Star Wars and Harry Potter to form a cohesive story must require a great amount of creativity, and I liked your explanation with the will of the Force linking together worlds across time and space. The pacing is good so far, and I find the dialogue (especially the one in this chapter) to be quite believable and in tune with the works it was inspired from. I'm looking forward to seeing more.