Reviews for Power Within |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Damnit! "Until the real chapter 25 is up? This is a real good story, although I must say, that it really sucks that it isn't finished and is likely abandoned and or otherwise unfinished for whatever reason... Don't get me wrong, I like this story, but way too many interesting Harry Potter fanfiction stories I've read are abandoned right at (as usual) some important scene, and in this case, it seems to be towards the end of the storyline, which, if true, doesn't help my estimation of the author's ability to finish writing a story, especially considering they swore up and down in an author's notes that they would never quit writing this story until it's finished...(just saying) |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it please write more |
![]() ![]() ![]() You need to update! This is one of the few powerful!Harry stories that I absolutely love. And there's not much Dumbledore or Ron bashing, which is a plus. I know its been YEARS since you've last updated, but don't give up on it! |
![]() ![]() Paraphrasing one of the reviews had said before: “powerful Harry”, “smart Harry”, and then “idiot Harry”. No, I don’t think that is the real problem here. It IS a problem, just not the biggest one. What the real problem here is “Diabolus ex Machiba”, and “Deus ex Machina” happening almost every time something goes wrong. There is simply no logical following during certain points. Wasted potential on the highest level. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story but after all this time it doesn't look like it's going to continue which is a shame! |
![]() ![]() Very imaginative. Well written thank you |
![]() ![]() You used the very counsel when you Should have used the noun council! Counsel mean to give advice,to advice to past on knowledge or wisdom. Council means a panel or council made up of a group of people to lead or advise. |
![]() ![]() old story, but you lost me here powerful harry and stupid harry and then smart harry, what gives |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are still planning on finishing this story as it's been over ten years since the last update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() really awesoem |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank god! he wrote madam pomfrey correct! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :o |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay |
![]() ![]() You got to update this story, it's really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue |