Reviews for Harry Samurai |
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![]() ![]() 1) interesting idea, would like to see where the story goes. 2) do you know what a backup is? 3) if you continue, rewrite the chapters to get rid of some of the mistakes |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and i hope that you are willing and able to continue this story. I like tha idea that harry was left i another country and was force back to Briton. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope the opportunity does come up for you to start writing again. All three of your stories have a lot more that can be told. I have enjoyed the tale of all three, even the one shot which I generally do not read. It seemed like a good hook of a first chapter for drawing one into a much larger story. Best wishes on your continued writing, looking forward to when I can enjoy more of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool Story! Look for to the updates if there is one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice excuse but we can all tell you just dont have what it takes to finish a good story like this. such a shame |
![]() ![]() ![]() so your completely full of shit? i honestly think you losing your computer is just a lie so you could stop writing the stories.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please consider coming back to your stories. This is very interesting and would love to know more of this world you have built. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amber? It was Rose before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a note - dying when someone dies, not dieing. Dieing is something done in industry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In ch.2 you said the Dursleys were sentence to Azkaban for life. This chapter has them wishing they could have been sent there. Dumbledore lost all his positions save Headmaster in ch.2, then in this chapter the gods took them away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Daniel or Damien? |
![]() ![]() Are you going to redo this one |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story was just getting to the best part. An angry dragon with an arena of idiots. I was looking forward to Fudge to maybe kick the bucket along with the other idiots of the Ministry or at least severely injured. Please continue with the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! Can you please finish! |
![]() ![]() this is amazing! |