|Reviews for Rewritten|
| SiriusSpiritus chapter 3 . 9/15
so so good!
| AliceinWonderland13 chapter 3 . 8/23
This is just such a lovely story! I mean maybe not the whole war part but the plot is just fantastic! I love Amelia’s history with Draco and Fred and Sirius (the bracelet detail is keeping me in SUSPENSE). Super excited to read some more
| paracosms chapter 3 . 8/18
just read all 3 chapters and i'm already loving this story! i wasn't expecting the beginning of the story, kind of in the middle of amelia's story already, but it's growing on me more and more. it led me into the story really well and gives you a lot of mystery in the character's backstory while also building lots of interest for the prequel that i believe you might write?
and of course i love amelia! we've only seen hints of it so far, but it's so interesting how you took a young character who's been hardened by a war and dropped her into the very beginning of a different one. and this is weirdly specific, but i loved the line where you described how amelia's hands were rough and callused in comparison to sirius's. normally in stories it goes the other way around, with the boy's hands being rougher than the girl's, but you switched it to make it more realistic to each of the characters respectively. anyways, amelia seems like a character who'll be really fun to read about-tough (obviously) and has a tragic backstory that isn't overdone and aligns well with rowling's canon universe. loved her interactions with james, too, and i can't wait to see how she treats peter in upcoming chapters.
and aw, neville! not the character i would normally expect as a companion in a time travel fanfiction but i'm loving him. poor guy has to watch his parents fall in love right in front of him haha
wow, this review was a Ramble. sorry about that. but kudos to you for the great character and the great writing, and i'm looking forward to future updates!
| paulaa90 chapter 3 . 8/10
I'm guessing that from that flashback that Sirius knew exactly who Amelia was. Amelia has to remember that the Peter she is meeting is not the Peter that betrayed his friends yet. There is still time to save him, to change who he may become.
And what is up with that bracelet? It was in the first story and I really want to know what Sirius knows about it. I'm hoping that Amelia will be able to save Regulus as well as Severus.
| paulaa90 chapter 2 . 8/10
I always liked the concept of this story, that not only did two people go back in time, but they ended up getting there in different years. With Nevile already there for seven years, he should have a good understanding of everything that is going on, and now with Amelia's arrival it looks like they'll be able to change the future.
| Cecilia Romano chapter 3 . 8/6
I really enjoyed this. Update soon!
| XxThereAreTwoTypesOfLaborxX chapter 3 . 8/4
good update! xx
| drwatsonn chapter 3 . 8/3
i love this and i love you :')
| tyozzie123 chapter 3 . 8/1
This is really good! I found it today and read all of it, and I think you're a really talented writer! Can't wait for the next update!
| Alicia Olivia Mirza chapter 2 . 7/17
I really enjoyed this chapter! I like it how Neville ended up years ahead of Amelia! And of course our favourite Marauders and Lily are back in game xD
It must be real hard to know they can never go back to their own time :S I’m also curious how Hermione knew that Amelia would end up in the past!
Can’t wait to read more!
| Alicia Olivia Mirza chapter 1 . 7/17
Very interesting so far! :)
| Scar.Of.Sun chapter 2 . 7/15
I dunno why but I love Amelia's temper and how ready she is for a fight every second of the day. Even through it must be a symptom of PTSD or something. Also, I hope her relationship with Neville will continue to be as interesting and that we'll continue to see how the seven years alone affected Neville. And even if the flashback was kinda horrifying because torture, I really liked to read about her complex thoughts about Draco - so apparently they were friends some time between first and fourth year? Interesting! And pretty sure that she has the impression that Sirius speaks like Draco haha Btw I'm lol about Sirius just cutting her off whenever he pleases (arsehole lol) and his comment about shagging a Ravenclaw bird (a hint that he likes Ravenclaw so that he will like Amelia's habits of arguing/debating maybe?) and how troublesome the 3rd year seem to be. I'll like to read about those 3rd year
| XxThereAreTwoTypesOfLaborxX chapter 2 . 7/11
Yay, an update! Good work! Xx
| Cecilia Romano chapter 2 . 7/11
Nice update! Happy to see the Marauders/Lily introduced, and the Time-Travel element is very interesting.
| drwatsonn chapter 2 . 7/11
Sneaky, sneaky ;)
James absolutely cracks me up. Honestly a certified drama queen in his own right. And she's met Sirius! I'm excited to see all the future interactions between Amelia and the Marauders and Lily (even though it might take a while on the former *cough* James *cough*).
Also that flashback? Hoo boy. It's got me thinking about that other spin-off publication you mentioned...
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next! xx