sir if i Robert Krause was doing it was be a 3 shoot one is a war in the sound vaillge 2 is battle with the 3 own son for the hits on him it 6 or 7 when Naruto had to get food to eat , 3 is for a battle and war with pay room and back pay too the ass took form Naruto , i was think why came back to the vaillge i Robert Krause was think of doing it when Naruto and wife sarkura move to the whirlpool and his rule it as lord of it and his wife/cousins out of sound vaillge is KAGE of the vaillge Naruto made and founder of , as for his 2 wife sarkura is queen and head of mic , as death masks on the vaillge and the west part too,

sir if you do other Naruto why not do one when Naruto is teen t seed kid be with egyl gods like abut black fox like warriors be Naruto own dad and the beast gril is mother to him and his body get muslces and powers of blacks and lights and his powers like wonder gril and his ninja and his living in his own dad and mom home and one day his suit is black and net and red and others stuff too ,boots of gold and speed and flying now, when Naruto do get marring it is ion , and sarkura too,

great story.

Ship him with Shizuka, Temari and Konan

Jiraya was a lil bitch ass oussy techer he sucked so did kakashi

why i Robert Krause well like or love to seeing is sarkura marring Naruto and the 2 had move to sound 1 and then move to the whirlpool and made a new vaillge of the old one and living in under barrriks and it is a super size house now when Naruto keeping his own men cave den and cave in and his wife had her own now , when the top floor had a bed room now, and when the old inn is the same way too , when Naruto had his body huther co and sarkura had mic and both had working now rulers of the whirlpool and the vaillge to the east is running and head of it don lee a ex ninja form the odd earth mew/elf men , abut black ops head is Ash K, a ex ninja and monk warrior , when Naruto had be lord of the lands now,

when Naruto had get to move to the red lights for a old used bar and up floor house was now his own now and when working it now put into the wall of men and woman s class ninjas and others warriors be put on the wall now each had red and black on the them heads now and some had eyes be bund out now, when old swords and others stuff is be put on the wall now, Naruto siting it his desk now seeing his hand working now, he was read old boig books now and get to read some scrolls he get form the city west part in lands of wind a evil black city and the old men Sammy go time get kill off long wither bead on him and took out now and his 1 woman too Vicky and army of tugs and others warriors get took out too, now a black ring is in his hire now, when swords and others stuff is base all the 3 bed room now and art too , the money had help out too, for Naruto ad help out all the town now and get stuff over it now, like new jobs for others in the town now, when up floor in 2 bed room is bed room he sleeping in now and art too and books he keeping and others he sold off now, when the money help up now he had get his wife a new woman shed now in the home she had now,

This story could do with a little of WHY naruto still tries to save the village.. I mean, there is NOBODY left (that you have shown) worthy of his mercy... There is no REASON to "save it"... Even if he gains the adulation of the people (an unlikely event in this one).. SO WHAT? Why would he want it? You use the "stick and carrot" routine for this one(which really doesn't work), but you forgot the carrot! All the people around naruto that he could have emulated, talk of "honor and loyalty" but NONE of them have those qualities.. So he couldn't mimic them. He can only mimic what he's been shown... DECEIT, BETRAYAL, LIES and hypocrisy, it's all he's known after all. (oh and from the third: COWARDLINESS, INDECISIVNESS, SENILITY, STUPIDITY and INCOMPETENCE!) Tsunade shares many of his traits, except maybe incompetence and senility... But she's still young(ish). When a kage comes to a meeting it should be "A KING COMING TO COURT".. "A GOD AMONG PEASANTS" and the people should be very aware of that, the second they step into the room!

This story could do with a little of WHY naruto still tries to save the village.. I mean, there is NOBODY left (that you have shown) worthy of his mercy... There is no REASON to "save it"... Even if he gains the adulation of the people (an unlikely event in this one).. SO WHAT? Why would he want it? You use the "stick and carrot" routine for this one(which really doesn't work), but you forgot the carrot! All the people around naruto that he could have emulated, talk of "honor and loyalty" but NONE of them have those qualities.. So he couldn't mimic them. He can only mimic what he's been shown... DECEIT, BETRAYAL, LIES and hypocrisy, it's all he's known after all. (oh and from the third: COWARDLINESS, INDECISIVNESS, SENILITY, STUPIDITY and INCOMPETENCE!) Tsunade shares many of his traits, except maybe incompetence and senility... But she's still young(ish). When a kage comes to a meeting it should be "A KING COMING TO COURT".. "A GOD AMONG PEASANTS" and they should be very aware of that, the second he steps into the room!

So his mother and mito were "too strong" to be molded.. Yet somehow you have jiraiya believing that someone that has killed 6 S-ranks is somehow weak enough to be? Are you starting to see why I say "bad storytelling"?

The very idea is predicated on a logistical error.. A fallacy of thought... If the jinchurki is created to take down threats THEY CANNOT... Then by it's very presence CANNOT be controlled or TAMED... A "tame" jinchuriki won't be physically ABLE to beat any threats they can't because they have to be able to be beaten by them! It's kinda a "chicken or the egg" problem... You can have either, or.. JUST NOT both. By having a weapon that makes the village above ALL others and can defeat anyone, you basically create something YOU CANNOT control, it's BETTER then you... (it HAS to be in order to deal with threats you don't know about/couldn't see)... By doing so, you place it OUTSIDE of your control. It has to WANT to protect the village.. WANT to be the hero (and nothing in naruto's life suggests ANY OF THAT)... Guiding someone like that, to your own point of view makes for a delicate "knife-edge" that quite frankly, I don't think anyone in the nartuo-verse is SMART ENOUGH to do. Canon fails UTTERLY... Most fan-fiction ALSO fails MISERABLY.

Actually it doesn't make a lot of sense, everything the third and jiraiya did would create the OPPOSITE of "loyal" to the village... They almost INSURE a traitor and destroyer of the world... Really makes you wonder... "what side were they on exactly"? It wasn't naruto's side (obviously), it wasn't the villages' side(as shown)... It wasn't the peoples' side...Heck it wasn't even THEIR OWN SIDE. (you can't be thought of as great if your student wipes everything outta existence). So I'm not sure what to think of their decisions except BAD WRITING. They had no motivation, no gain, and only loss... All-in-all it seems just like shoddy writing, to keep naruto secret (which was ridicules) and keep him an "underdog" for absolutely no reason then just to KEEP that theme going longer then needed. (it's really poor storytelling) I am surprised so many authors wanna parrot such crappy work!

"we will hunt the jinchuriki from the most powerful to the weakest".. Oh yes great plan.. The nine tails alone blows up the statue unless added LAST, DUMB ASS! Seriously, I know the plot of naruto is FILLED with holes you can drive a semi-truck through, but do fan-fictions need to be as bad? Again, it's about the bad-guys KNOWING they're beat (they are supposedly intellectual) so they should KNOW when they are DONE! I dunno why the third just didn't STEP DOWN as hokage (he obviously was doing a terrible job).. Danzo just should have QUIT (he ran things better from the shadows and he was never going to get a jinchuriki with his methods, it was suicide. What he was going to become hokage for a total of 10 years TOPS before old age killed him off?)... Orochimaru is nearly LAUGHABLE in his attempts... What was he gonna do in three years when sasuke's body rotted out? There weren't anymore uchiha! All these people had really STUPID motivations... I mean really, really dumb, retarded motivations! And itachi?... That was possibly the stupidest of them all... "lets make him be dominated by hate, so he can love the village"...wtf? You see how stupid that sounds right? It would even confuse a toddler... Because it MAKES NO SENSE... You need to write a story where the uchiha (ALL the uchiha) are killed the night of the massacre.. Where danzo is PUT IN HIS PLACE by a kage that at least is semi-believable, in that got them through 2 wars... and the security of the leaf is an actual BARRIER not the 60's style batman "cops". Where anbu are "BLACK OPS" not ridicules people in animal masks that show up too late.

The whole thing of jiraiya's attempt is DUMB... "lasting impression"?.. BLOW IT OFF... "martyr"? TO WHOM? It's a stupid excuse to include this. It's very confusing, using OLD DATA that doesn't really apply anymore. Naruto should just "ghost" his ass and be DONE with him. (but that kinda leaves you in a lurch about what to write doesn't it?)

You know the rinnegan is FAR stronger then the sharringan, in a real fight between pein and obitedo, obitedo WOULD LOSE. It's ranked that way even from kishimoto(and every other database)... (and he created both bloodlines)... SO YEAH.. "madara" wouldn't stand a chance. Nageto is the powerhouse... Obitedo is like all uchiha and just A PEST! (vermin, insect, garbage, maggot, whatever term you like better, they all mean the same thing).

when my beliefs is about the same way of JIRAIYA be a bad godfather to Naruto and 2 is on his team met too , as for not let him go up the ranks is bull to me Robert Krause , i think if his was up the racks he well had the money form both his dad and mom and scrolls too and then the house and town his mom and dad had when the 2 was living , as for Naruto get marring i Robert Krause was think of made his team met sarkura be his wife and ion and ten-ten , when each gril well living in a house sarkura is in the sun house moon for ion and the haven house is ten-ten, when then Naruto had helping in the red lights town as he get a old bar and living on the top floor now, the king lord ninjas bar Naruto side show , when on the top floor had pics on the wall now, old pics of s class bad guys and woman he took out and he had money form it and was used to help out too, he had took over JIRAIYA made out books used teen lovers boys and hot grils and woman for the books too,