Reviews for Push Comes to Shove
Ariadne Venegas chapter 5 . 7/21/2023
My only grievance is that you name the baby after that stain killing bitch of a lie. Could the real author of Naruto had wrote the thing wouldn’t exist at all.
Yndaime chapter 1 . 7/4/2023
Good god the portrayal of Jiraiya here is horrible. He would never call his godson a failure
D3RP1256 chapter 5 . 4/24/2023
This story was fucking amazing. I loved all of it and never thought I would appreciate such a short story to this degree. Keep up the amazing work. I look forward to more of your work.
Axccel chapter 2 . 4/2/2023
Truly, the concept of civilians in a ninja village is stupid and was a horrible idea.
Axccel chapter 1 . 4/2/2023
Honestly, if Naruto told Tsunade about the too much chakra thing and Jiraiya refusing to compensate for that, she'd probably take Naruto as her own student and punish Jiraiya. Heck, even in reserves for whatever he'd still need training like any other genin or would be useless and would quickly be found to have too much chakra and would get the training he needs...followed by a lot of dangerous questions about why he was even there when he shows his kinesthetic learning genius and power.

Speaking of the seal. Technically, going by its canonical abilities described in the series, the seal shouldn't allow Naruto to access Kurama's chakra at all.

As for a prodigy for a student...Naruto learned the Rasengan in a week. True, he didn't perfect it as he needed a clone at the time, but he could use it. And speaking of, he learned the Shadow Clone and Mass Shadow Clone techniques in like, an hour or something.

He's a book idiot, but a kinesthetic genius.
sakurai.ryuu chapter 5 . 3/13/2023
sad not sakura and ino in harem :(
DarkHunter10 chapter 3 . 2/27/2023
He doesn't CARE about what naruto thinks or feels but wants to sacrifice himself to manipulate naruto's FEELINGS.. You do REALIZE that is a contradiction right? Also if naruto doesn't CARE what the old toad thinks, HOW is his death going to influence naruto AT ALL? It's not just "mental gymnastics" it's utter bull-crap... He cannot "not care" and "influence" the same person.. Because influence demands CARING. So it didn't really make the old toad come across bad, it made him come across as absolutely nonsensical.
DarkHunter10 chapter 4 . 2/26/2023
One problem I've always had with the naruto story? Why didn't pein just conquer the ninja world? He had the power to do so! He had the akutski, which were APPARENTLY powerful enough that 2 any of the tailed beasts... So why didn't he just START with taking it over? Surely the diaymos weren't THAT tough of opponents... So wouldn't it have made MORE sense to just eliminate them and take their power?(since it's only political) Why do the hair-brained "moon eye" plan at all? Seems very "counter-productive".. Because lets face it.. "moon eye" has so many FLAWS in the so called "plan" that swiss cheese looks more stable... (heck, WATER is more solid).. Obit believing in it? Maybe... The uchiha are NOT what you'd call "pillars of mental stability", or "long term thinkers"... But trying to talk someone ELSE into believing it? Not likely. FAR MORE likely, the other person would laugh, say "that's REALLY STUPID" and do something else.
DarkHunter10 chapter 5 . 2/26/2023
Actually, things are a LOT more dire for Obito then you have here... No Rinnegan, no statue... It can't be summoned WITHOUT the rinnegan, so he's basically COMPLETELY SCREWED at the start of this. This always struck me as ONE of the major FLAWS in his "plan".

With a LOT of the epilogue, there is a few glaring omissions... Why would naruto NEED a "spy network" he can LITERALLY see through the eyes of different people (with the piercing he can create) and probably through shadow clones eyes too.. Makes having a "spy network" kinda redundant doesn't it? Also "naruto haters"? Seems a bit silly doesn't it?.. I mean HOW? WHY?... That he's making the village stronger? Getting better pay for their missions? How does ANYBODY hate that? The kyuubi? You realize THAT stopped all the way back in the FIRST season with the chunin exams right? The fact he was a "nobody"? 1. He has two very illustrious clans, you said were revealed and 2. Minato had no clan... (that was known).. All in all, the epilogue was...ODD, who really picks a fight with someone that can HOVER OVER A VILLAGE AND FLATTEN IT WITH A WORD? He makes Minato look like a MINOR INCONVENIENCE on the battlefield.
Multi fandom geekerello chapter 1 . 2/25/2023
I dunno where you get so much hate and vitriol from but you might as well write it with totally new names and characters considering they act NOTHING like canon. Jiraiya is the TOAD SAGE and he’s depicted here calling them lousy fly eaters with warts. Everything he learnt he learnt from them. His relation with Naruto is just as horribly misportrayed and honestly I’m not reading this anymore. Kudos
Guest chapter 5 . 12/21/2022
This is a poor quality fic, but it’s a perfect guilty pleasure. Naruto is such a Mary Sue her—him having multiple wives takes the cake on that. Wow.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/21/2022
This version of Jiaiya is so damn evil wow
Guest chapter 3 . 12/21/2022
Honestly, you take Sasuke bashing to the next dang level. You can say Sasuke is enough, bizarre, rude, ruthless, or stupid. But he was NEVER a sexist and he would never do THAT to a woman. It’s frankly disgusting how authors use that action as a tool to bash characters they don’t like. Going too far and losing rationality in their hatred for a particular character.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/21/2022
Sirius Black gets bashed way more in his godfather it duties than Jiraiya ever did, even though Jiraiya failed far more spectacularly.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2022
LOL. I enjoyed seeing Jiraiya get bashed for abandoning Naruto. No, he didn’t have to take care of him. But he SHOULD have. That’s what people with morals do! But Jiraiya is not one of them…
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