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| A. Serpico chapter 1 . 6/28
its an amazing stoory and you put yourself in it very well, i understand the dillema and undwrstand your view.
My opinion, about the text, is that you should write Angel talking to the other guy, friendly, giving the condolences and just that. no need to mention about Tom, or anything else, despite of hating the other woman.
Congratulations and i hope you get this review.