Reviews for Pokegirl Origin |
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TheBlackCatSwordsman chapter 13 . 2/4 Question- when did Asuka change from a Charmanda to a Domina? |
Guest chapter 13 . 7/6/2022 Why the hell introducing evangelion in a Pokémon fic. Shini's dad gonna enslave Arceus and fuck this world |
Guest chapter 9 . 9/20/2021 Dammm, the plot is really good. How do you keep it so interesting! |
FriendlyFire59 chapter 12 . 4/16/2021 P.S. What's or what's going to happen to the pokegirls he has captured? |
FriendlyFire59 chapter 13 . 4/15/2021 Found this story the other day and I have enjoyed your storyline. Of the 'sucks to live here' universes, Worm, Warhammer 40K, and Pokegirl. Hmmm, I wouldn't want to live in any of them so I don't know where I was taking this thought. Anyway, thanks for posting and looking forward to more chapters. |
Guest chapter 13 . 3/16/2021 Guys he is spelling Delia’s name wrong so it isn’t the actual Delia duh. |
Sleepwalker 5462 chapter 3 . 2/5/2021 Wow |
Sleepwalker 5462 chapter 2 . 2/5/2021 Awesome |
Dracoog101 chapter 13 . 1/27/2021 I hope this and your oc in ranmasmut ninjas and stuff world stories get updated soon. You make interesting stories with lemonade instead of lemons without plot which is just boring. The version of blue/Garry is enjoyable and it would be cool to have a side story from ash's perspective. Also I wonder if geno didn't go off the deep end because his wife was most likely a pokegirl and most likely no angelsz. |
ExXiled chapter 1 . 12/3/2020 I just read the document about the creation of pokegirls and I...didn't expect it to be this dark tbh. I didn't even know what exactly pokegirls are before today actually |
ExXiled chapter 1 . 12/3/2020 Alright, I'll bite. I still haven't read this so what's so tragic and grim about this that everyone is crying? |
Re Lovely Lover chapter 2 . 10/13/2020 Hell fucking no. Delia the public cumdump. Just why? Hell I'm surprised he didnt pursue her doing the shower routine where he convinces her to continue and breastfeed or something getting to where he can indirectly scratch her itch until he can directly. That bit was a massive fuck no. Wouldve preferred a gangbang warning and such. That destroyed my mood completely. Did not finish this chapter. |
Asclepius Ouroboros chapter 13 . 7/18/2020 Interesting |
narutokyrptonite chapter 5 . 6/15/2020 I'm sorry I support everyone's ideas on fanfic and never discriminate but this one had me crying even if it was a role-play scene it hit me emotionally and I can't keep reading |
Flygar chapter 5 . 3/9/2020 and now I'm reading about brainwashing in a mainstream society in this world. Nope nope nope, too much dystopia to hind behind the sex, makes it too depressing to think about when reading this story. |