Reviews for The Thunder Demon Straw Hat Luffy
Aedwards179 chapter 14 . 3/19
Wait. isn't the top of reverse mountain technically the all blue? all 4 blues connect there.
Aedwards179 chapter 13 . 3/19
Why does luffy show do oittle emotions? like I understand making a more serious luffy, but making it so he always monotonous or blank faced is ridiculous. whitebeard and shanks both know how to smile, party and have fun while being serious when it's needed. i can't see Luffy losing his fun personality while in the new world
Aedwards179 chapter 5 . 3/19
Why would luffy, a man whos spent the last 10 years in the grand line know about a random east blue pirate that got killed 3 years ago. if he was still known and had an active bounty I'd understand but he doesn't
Aedwards179 chapter 2 . 3/19
theres really no need to add the speeds of everything. its just going to bite you in the ass later
Dauntes chapter 18 . 2/24
I mean, my biggest criticism is that Luffy is inconsistent. Either have him be a ruthless badass that sticks his fist through chests, or have him be the canon soft touch that just beats them down. The inconsistency is frankly obnoxious, or the reasoning incredibly poorly written. Thanks.
Bigreddog68 chapter 39 . 2/16
Hoping the muses allow you to come back to this! Very good story!
Serei Rosewood chapter 39 . 1/6
Been awhile since you updated this story, looking forward to seeing the next chapter. Been a good read so far.
yrlastin chapter 10 . 1/4
Nojiko JOIN!
yrlastin chapter 1 . 1/4
Is he named Luffy or Jack?
Guest chapter 39 . 1/1
Next chapter please
aresflamel20043 chapter 39 . 12/23/2023
continue the story please
RangaZeus chapter 1 . 11/11/2023
I read this story ages ago it's a good one and have been waiting for an update since last time. So if the author reads this can you please update it
acowles02 chapter 20 . 9/20/2023
Thats….. thats literally impossible. Compasses dont work like that. And i highly doubt the islands are in a straightvline from each other
acowles02 chapter 5 . 9/20/2023
Dunno if your ever honna read this, but you dont need to say what isnso familiar like 6 times.
Virtual Angel chapter 39 . 9/16/2023
Came back to reread this amazing work️
I love this Luffy and I like that he's not hiding his power.
I just can't wait to read more...
I really hope that this work is not abandoned and will be finished eventually
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