|Reviews for The Thunder Demon Straw Hat Luffy|
| Muncher50 chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
I'm just wondering because he left with shanks for 10 years immediately after gaining his devil fruit, does that mean he's not brothers with ace and sabo?
| Dr1zzy chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
Thx for the update. Great idea with the gun
| Bloody Rogue dragon deity king chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
| inouekurosaki26 chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
interesting. i like luffy's new look and height jajaja the only thing i dont like is that he was away for ten years so he didnt meet sabo and ace and they didnt form they brotherhood :(
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
I see a lot of promise for this story
| VoyagersUnite chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
great second chapter, a few misspelled words, but quite entertaining. looking forward to the next chapter
| ChunkyFunkyMunky chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
I am not happy with the idea of Luffy wielding a katana. There was no point in having Luffy using a sword. He is known for using his bare hands with his devil fruit, so a sword would be redundant. Even a gun is pushing it.
I did not expect for you to keep Luffy with Shanks that long. So Luffy does not know Ace or Sabo? That is pretty disappointing.
| sudhush chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
good start of the story and the plot is also nicely done, just continue with the story thats all, until next chapter. Good Day
| El Pirato chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
nice. will you give DFs to others?
| VoyagersUnite chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
the first chapter was good
| Asr chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
I seen many like this but never finished alway stop a few chapters in. Let’s hope u stick to this. Good first chapter
| luna chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
is there going to be romence ?
| Poseidon3000 chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
| Bloody Rogue dragon deity king chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
| Dr1zzy chapter 1 . 6/30/2018