Reviews for The Thunder Demon Straw Hat Luffy
Muncher50 chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
I'm just wondering because he left with shanks for 10 years immediately after gaining his devil fruit, does that mean he's not brothers with ace and sabo?
Dr1zzy chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
Thx for the update. Great idea with the gun
Bloody Rogue dragon deity king chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
not bad
inouekurosaki26 chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
interesting. i like luffy's new look and height jajaja the only thing i dont like is that he was away for ten years so he didnt meet sabo and ace and they didnt form they brotherhood :(
Guest chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
I see a lot of promise for this story
VoyagersUnite chapter 2 . 7/1/2018
great second chapter, a few misspelled words, but quite entertaining. looking forward to the next chapter
ChunkyFunkyMunky chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
I am not happy with the idea of Luffy wielding a katana. There was no point in having Luffy using a sword. He is known for using his bare hands with his devil fruit, so a sword would be redundant. Even a gun is pushing it.

I did not expect for you to keep Luffy with Shanks that long. So Luffy does not know Ace or Sabo? That is pretty disappointing.
sudhush chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
good start of the story and the plot is also nicely done, just continue with the story thats all, until next chapter. Good Day
El Pirato chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
nice. will you give DFs to others?
VoyagersUnite chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
the first chapter was good
Asr chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
I seen many like this but never finished alway stop a few chapters in. Let’s hope u stick to this. Good first chapter
luna chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
is there going to be romence ?
Poseidon3000 chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
Bloody Rogue dragon deity king chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
Very interesting
Dr1zzy chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
Intriguing start
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