| Reviews for The Thunder Demon Straw Hat Luffy |
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   jlee0799 chapter 4 . 7/25/2018 The rumble-rumble fruit is so great. Although I'm curious about something. Does anyone else wonder if electromagnetism works with the rumble fruit? It should right? |
| YeTianshi chapter 4 . 7/20/2018 It was a great chapter, can't wait to see more :D I'm especially excited for Luffy to meet Mihawk, fight Arlong and have Robin join the crew :D |
| YeTianshi chapter 2 . 7/20/2018 I really don't think Koby would have been able to withstand a Conqueror's Haki at that stage, he was a spineless coward at the time. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/12/2018 This is really good so far, keep up the great writing! I also love that you frequently update and don't just abandon the story for a full month or months on end like other writers do. Good luck! |
| TBM10 chapter 4 . 7/14/2018 Hey great story Though luffy uses his haki alot in the east blue, he probably doesnt need to use it at all. Second i hope he isnt using his full power conquerors haki, because if he was its very weak (i mean canon luffy neutralised 50,000 fishmen with one burst) Third wont haki make any sword strong enough not to melt? And haki alone could harm any devil fruit user Also try proof reading your stories (or put them on microsoft word to minimize errors) Either way awesome story Keep updating Thank you |
| arinst2305 chapter 4 . 7/13/2018 Nect |
| guest chapter 4 . 7/12/2018 You could try going in a different direction to 99% of other fanfics on this site by making luffy an actual pirate for example raiding other ships or stealing from a town once in a while, instead of a judgmental hero who goes around trying to save everyone and only ever kills "bad guys" |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/11/2018 I really like this story so far, you're a really creative writer with great ideas. Keep up the good work but I am curious if you have a beta reader? |
| Shadowdragondanny chapter 4 . 7/12/2018 Like so far can’t wait for more |
| VoyagersUnite chapter 4 . 7/12/2018 Yay new chapter! |
| TheOnlyKing chapter 4 . 7/12/2018 Damn Luffy is a little too preachy for my liking... |
| Bloody Rogue dragon deity king chapter 4 . 7/12/2018 yeowch, a short chapter |
| AguionStryke chapter 4 . 7/12/2018 Alright! Usopp is one of my favorite characters, let's see how Luffy'll convince him to join. I expect a Kuro curbstomp, btw. |
| sudhush chapter 4 . 7/12/2018 really great chapter and I liked that new function of DF and Haki, bro nice thinking and seastone sword that really great can't wait for the next chapter. And please don't abandon the story. Great work dude. |
| NPGamer11 chapter 4 . 7/12/2018 Like it. I love stories where Luffy is a badass. |