Selling drugs? Really? ...Fuck this shit, I'm out.

Okay, WHAT IS THIS SHIT?! Ugh, I've about had enough of this story.

Yeah, fuck your version of Luffy, author.

HAHA, FINALLY! A fic where an OP Luffy's 1st bounty is at least 100,000,000 beri!

I generally like this story, but it feels a bit misleading to have 270k words written without the main pairing even appearing at any point. unless you're planning on diverging from canon then that might be something you want to mention in the first chapter.

It's an interesting story even if it has quite a few mistakes it's nothing too serious to stop me reading, misspelled words using the wrong word or simply having a word missing is a common occurrence throughout the story often you won't catch these mistakes as a simple spell check won't show you too many issues as you mostly use the wrong spelling/word when you make those mistakes in alot of cases it's mostly using he instead of she and vice versa there are other mistakes but none spring to mind as of writing this review. as for help with writers block I find if I can find someone to talk my ideas through it can respark my inspiration especially if they have a lot of passion for the topic. A beta reader would be a big help for you in this regard if they enjoy the story they can offer you input or ideas when you're own creativity has fallen while also helping you catch the mistakes made in the story.

Another option I've been playing around with the idea for myself is using ai they may be useful in checking the story for errors or even suggesting new ideas I'm not sure how effective they are as I've yet to try it with my own story that I'm writing. my idea to test how effective ai is to write a chapter with alot of common errors and see if it can fix the issues I'm also terrible with punctuation so if ai can help with that it should help me improve the quality of my own work in theory.

Love the story hope you come back and make a new update it's been a year

Please update soon I would really like for the story Continue if you can if you have time.

I really hope you come back to this fic I am really enjoying it

Finally finished reading this story to the end! Something I don’t understand: Why does it matter that the Gum-Gum fruit in this is not the same after the reveal? This is a fanfiction where Luffy ate the Rumble-Rumble fruit. Whether or not the Gum-Gum fruit is what it’s actually supposed to be shouldn’t really make a difference. Don’t remember reading about it in this story either.

My lord that ending was good holy lord

This is good, very good. I recommend for people who like serious protagonists 7.8/10

This is a good fanfic the best I have read and also I like where Luffy makes and underground business while that happens he will turn the world upsidedown the story is really really good so keep it up man, And also can you update as soon you can? this is the only fanfic I read right now. Thanks!

please bro come back we not even in time skip yet pleaseee I beg of youv

At this point you should have just made a oc instead of just pasting it over an established character, also this luffy just acts like a a** most of the time. Sorry but I ain’t reading anymore of it, hope you do better on other fanfics.