Reviews for The Thunder Demon Straw Hat Luffy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I mean, my biggest criticism is that Luffy is inconsistent. Either have him be a ruthless badass that sticks his fist through chests, or have him be the canon soft touch that just beats them down. The inconsistency is frankly obnoxious, or the reasoning incredibly poorly written. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hoping the muses allow you to come back to this! Very good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been awhile since you updated this story, looking forward to seeing the next chapter. Been a good read so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nojiko JOIN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is he named Luffy or Jack? |
![]() ![]() Next chapter please |
![]() ![]() ![]() continue the story please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this story ages ago it's a good one and have been waiting for an update since last time. So if the author reads this can you please update it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thats….. thats literally impossible. Compasses dont work like that. And i highly doubt the islands are in a straightvline from each other |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dunno if your ever honna read this, but you dont need to say what isnso familiar like 6 times. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Came back to reread this amazing work️ I love this Luffy and I like that he's not hiding his power. I just can't wait to read more... I really hope that this work is not abandoned and will be finished eventually |
![]() ![]() RIP |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hancock hasn't appeared yet lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nuh uh |
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