Reviews for The Thunder Demon Straw Hat Luffy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So glad to see this story updated it is one of my favourites thank you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back. Going to have to go back and re read from chapter 1 lol. keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back. Hope to see more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this chapter. I can't wait to read the next one to see what happens. Well, take care.️️️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg its so nice to finally read another chapter from you :O i love all 3 of your stories' concepts and i really hope this isnt the only one you plan to update some more :0 please ofc take all the time you need to get/keep that motivation goin |
![]() ![]() ![]() always was hoping this story would continue! Am here for it, happy that you're returning and hope to see more from you! Welcome back 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() so glad to see this update, hope you're doing well, keep up the great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() also, scorpion is calling for copyright infringement |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story has become so violent it's comical. this is a compliment, it's almost unhinged but so enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() where's the 7th sea? |
![]() ![]() ![]() so i understand in this fanfic luffy and co are not pirates, but rather marines or pirate hunters, and the whole fanfic is rainbows and butterflies and naruto? although in the original they were never pirates but rather rebels because of the confrontation with the government |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay first off I do like the story it's really very interesting but you could have still had Luffy kill Wapol and somehow explain how he found out that you could take somebody's devil fruit out of their body after you've killed them could have been as simple as finding it in some ancient text that he might have come across or maybe he just could have figured it out by pure accident I mean especially if you're going to have them in the black market industry it would have been a good idea to just cut out the middle man especially if you would have had him give that devil fruit power to one of his new subordinates who is going to be helping run the business but doesn't have the devil fruit just a thought but that's definitely something I would have done |
![]() ![]() please update |