This is a good fanfic the best I have read and also I like where Luffy makes and underground business while that happens he will turn the world upsidedown the story is really really good so keep it up man, And also can you update as soon you can? this is the only fanfic I read right now. Thanks!

please bro come back we not even in time skip yet pleaseee I beg of youv

At this point you should have just made a oc instead of just pasting it over an established character, also this luffy just acts like a a** most of the time. Sorry but I ain’t reading anymore of it, hope you do better on other fanfics.

I don't know if u read the comments but if you do I hope you post next chapter soon it's a good story so far I and a lot of people would like to see we're this goes hope your well.

Luffy gonna sell Devil Fruits?

Makes no sense why would luffy care about Koby and why did he not kill all the marines he is a pirate and you know shanks loves killing marines so luffy would get that from him right cause he was his role model and he is mature so he kills is is the happy-go-lucky luffy

Imma give it another chance I legit don’t feel like looking for other fics

This is midi can already tell this luffy already feels like a cocky little fuck

thanks for the awesome chapter hope the next will be soon uploaded

omg I love this sm, can't wait for the next chapter!

Amazing please keep up the work

Please update soon

1 I love this fanfiction 2 it couldn't be 20 years ago cause he died sometime before that its not a problem just wanted to point it out

One of the typical OC selfstorms into the image of the main character. It is not even a change in nature, but a completely new character. And his thoughts on the island of Dram when the head was declined by my point, after which I definitely will not take it as Luffy. Luffy does not sit on the throne, because his place on the nose of his ship, ahead of all. He does not harm whiskey, because why does he need alcohol when he has already been intoxical from adventure? He will never take to his team who fell. In his team, people were only with the most brought dreams by the standards of ordinary people. To the 18th chapter, I can no longer read it. Your OC would never have taken Usoppa to the team even with knowledge of who his father, he would never take back, if he is ready for less to kill. Your character is cruel, cold-blooded, Pride, Narcissus and many more not the most flattering characteristics about him. Nevertheless, it includes a sharp care of the crew, when it requires the plot, or absolutely delusional ideas like creating a black market or ads of Alabastra in their territory. He wants to become the king of pirates and his ideas about piracy should be completely different than you tried to prove here. Shanks clearly did not kill for stupid insults, being above it, and Luffy, who was even kind and being a student of Shanks, here acts as a serial killer. For them, pirate is a free person and traveler. The author, you all were distracted. With the quality of the letter, they will not argue, because it is high, but this Luffy is, in my opinion, what made this work by another ordinary fanfic. You did the essence of the new character, and the plot remained the same.

Chidori? Are you seriously? how trite! Why is it always necessary to shout about your attacks?! this looks so damn stupid!