Reviews for The Thunder Demon Straw Hat Luffy
TalisBlacksmith chapter 1 . 7/5/2022
lol this ImMoku dude is a dumbass. First, the "her" is a spelling mistake, I don't know how you didn't even notice that, either you're ignorant or just dumb. Second, it isn't illogical that he didn't get a wanted poster, he was a bounty hunter he helped bring people with bounties in, so it's completely illogical that the marines are gonna put a bounty on his head. Third, your grammar hurts my soul, be better at writing first and then you could judge people on their writing. The only thing that he said here that makes sense is the "why didn't he get a bounty when he was with the shanks pirates" either he was dropped off on an island that doesn't have people on it and they trained him there or they just didn't fight pirates in those 10 years(which is impossible cuz they're in the new world) or they just played it safe and trained him on the ship and didn't bring him into fights and just let him go when he was ready. Either way there's alot of possibilities.
ImMoku chapter 6 . 7/5/2022
your writing style hurt my eyes bro
ImMoku chapter 4 . 7/5/2022
this is unlogical luffy hunt a bounty until he got 800 million worth belly and he didnt get his own bounty poster?
ImMoku chapter 3 . 7/5/2022
wow luffy think roronoa zoro is woman so he ask coby who is HER
ImMoku chapter 2 . 7/5/2022
i wonder why luffy doesnt have bounty after 10 years journey with shanks? did he do nothing when another crew is fighting?
Lil Kodak chapter 39 . 7/2/2022
If you don't make another chapter i might kill my self fr
Fyi I'm jp means just playing
This book is amazing
demdaadude chapter 5 . 6/28/2022
oi yeashhhhhhh great
Guest chapter 39 . 6/26/2022
Great story idk what you're gonna doo about the gomu gomu no mi being revealed as the nika fruit but keep it up i had a lot of fun reading it.
Xyr chapter 1 . 6/21/2022
This is awesome
Guest chapter 39 . 6/19/2022
Your OCs are trash.
Guest chapter 39 . 6/18/2022
I really need your fanfiction rn so plz hurry and make a new one
aelfie chapter 39 . 6/20/2022
omg i love your story and I can't wait for the next update
losteverything chapter 39 . 6/19/2022
i have been reading this for a week and i love your AU! Can't wait for the next update!
DracoKing30 chapter 39 . 6/16/2022
Really love this story can't wait for new chapters
zSnako chapter 2 . 6/15/2022
the second I saw the "steel toed boots" I was like, "this guy DEFINITELY writes Naruto fanfiction lmao.
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