Western lands

That is so good I cry I'm this chapter

why didnt u finish it. u need to finish it

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I wish this story wasn't two years old.

;.;

Then there might've been a hope for an update.

*sigh*

Oh well, I enjoyed it terribly while it lasted! I'll just take chap. 37 as some impromptu ending.

D

Please update or give me some kind of happy ending to this please! this story is one of my top favourites! please!

WOW! This is really good! I hope you update soon! I stayed up until 2 am ish... thats like 3 and a half hours reading this great fic! ' I'm goin to bed now. I hope you update soon! z snorez im tired

OMG! update as soon as you can this story ROCKS!

i hope miroku and kagome dont become a pair i like inuyasha and kagome being together same with sango and miroku but its cool if miroku is like a brother to kagome. well i really like your story

This story is absolutely amazing and you left it on such a cliffhanger! You have to finish it and it worries me that you haven't updated in over a year! :( Please come back and finish this story, I am dying to know what happens next!

I thought the whole scene between Inuyasha and Kagome in the lastest chapter was perfect, and the rest of your story is simply amazing. Hurry back and update soon!

Dude, each and every chapter gets better and better! How in the world do you do it! Oh, and hey, don't change the rating to PG-13, your language isn't all that drastically terrible or anything, it's just insults and name-calling that really isn't that bad at all. I love it how Miroku doesn't even try to use the monk excuse in this one, and Sango whacks him with the boomerang, haha, it's, well, there's no word for it, i guess. Oh, my gosh, sorry, I'm supposed to be helping you, huh? I guess I haven't been very good at doing that, but...I really can't find anything to criticize! You're just perfect, and the way your story is, there doesn't seem to be anything you need fix! If I do see something, I'll try to let you know, but I highly doubt it!

Dangit! You're such a good writer, and so gosh dang funny. I really love when Miroku gets scolded by the women, and feigns innocence by using the excuse that he's a monk and would never do anything so unthinkable! It is utterly hilarious! And just the way you write about the characters' personalities, while also including a bit of your own style, it's so amazing! How in the world do you do it?

Don't worry about it being pointless, it's perfect the way you have it. I think it has a point, and even if it didn't, it's okay, because every story needs those little scenes where you take a little breath in between big dramatic things that have just happened. Like a breather and relaxer scene. At the end of it, you've managed to calm down, even with the part about Naraku making plans and all. You know he's most likely going to take some kind of action, but you don't get all panicked really, just a bit curious about what he's scheming to do and everything. It is so great! Keep up the fantabulous work!

Holy shizzin' crap! I love it! The story is getting so interesting, and you don't use any language at all, and your style is just so great. My gosh, just keep up the fantabulous work you've been doing. You are such a great writer!

your story is so good so far i like it but i'm not done reading yet[i don't like miroku too close to kagome but good story though!

That was a sweet story. update soon plz!