I don't think if I can read any other ff for ditf anymore.

I curse my inability to not interpret these texts completely and think what the author wanted to paint on the canvas. I can see the bigger pictures, but the little details evades me. Damn, like how was the kid of Zero two and hiro inside strelizia. I first thought, since past, present and future is melting and all, those kids from future did some whamy zammy to force their conscience to their past and interact with their parent. But, but zero two and hiro mourned Strelizia's death as if she reallly died, like their own blood daughter who grew up in wartime, inside a warmachine,without them knowing and sacrificed herself.
ANd the thing with gaia and plantation 1. I understood Strelizia bringing all those magma from cosmos to the main fault point, but what the hell did gaia and plantation 1 and all remaining klaxasaurs did to give her a final push. How didi their magma reached her. The author really painted a pretty picture describing this moment, but it bluury for me and it really made me sad. Not able to imagine everything they wrote.

Everything felt like a 10/10 scifi survival movie, though.
Thanks

This was a pained read. At first I didn't understand why ichigo was hyperventilating so much. Plus the text were merged a lot. It was hard to decifer which broken pieces should be joined to make a sentence, which were past interactions and which were ichigos delusions. Everything were melding.

But I think I got a gist of it.
Hiro wasn't a normal kid like everyone presumed. He was made from elistre's mate's gene and lived with zero two in his early years.
What ichigo believed was natural love between Hiro and zero two, was actually planned from the start. Hell, they were created only for that single purpose.
I didn't get those genetic drawing with blue ink in the room
It was a good chapter nonetheless.

It was a klaxo porno mag, wasn't it. To think a porno mag was carefully preserved, in a fricking WAR ZONE, for a million of years, while the doctor was struggling to decode klaxo tech, coz the princess didn't have many books in her archive, is hilarious.

You can somehow make this beta more pathetic. That's...well, not a talent. It's easy to make a coward.

Do you need fix all tex. have text that is not understood at all.

This story is truly a work of art. I have read this story multiple times, and every time, it hooks me just like the first time. I'm looking forward to the trilogy you are working on.

This has been my comfort fic for the last 3 years now, after coming back to read MiTF what must be over 20 times I felt like I should say just how much I love it. It’s been my go to comfort fic since I found it and it’ll continue being my go to comfort fic, thank you so much for sharing this with us all!

I think its amazing how, when she’s connected to Hiro, Zerotwo’s thoughts become so much clearer

While I absolutly love what you did here, I have a Slight criticism that I have to make.

The writing is Brilliantly done, and entertaining to read, you truly bring ideas to life and thats amazing, you used the Plot and themes of the original content to an amazing degree and improved what was there.

However, there are some moments where the things that you wrote arent very clear and they confuse the reader. For example:

When Ichigo was in the lab before she started having “hallucinations”(for a lack of better word) its very mindboggling to read. After reading your summary here at the end it makes a little more sense, but as somebody with no context it destroys the brain.

You had a weird thing that would switch perspectives with every scene, and while it worked in a lot of the story, it made it hard to follow in other parts, an example of this being well done however happens just short of the end, when you introduce the entity that was in Strelitzia, or back on the beach chapter and She was still in the Process of “Waking” with the FranXX trying to figure out what it is, and who its “cores” are

Thats my only real issue, other than that, fantastic job.

do you have any updates on the book? ty i love the story btw

This is A Mavelous writing. The writer is a mavelous one.
It's like I am watching an actual anime...

Absolutely amazing.

I finally came back to finish this. Started over, and I'm glad I did.

This is one of the greats, I would say. Most definitely the best Ditf fanfic, and I would argue it is even better than the original sorry itself. I love this story. I love you for writing it.

Thank you for allowing myself, and others, to experience this beauty.

Zirx

This is better the the original series. The specific detail. Even if this was done on the episode in which hiro showed ichigo those memories the understanding f ichigo who we know is intelligent seeing what zero two really is. A horribly scared and traumatized child who only concept of love or care came from hiro. It makes. Senses narratively bu5 I honestly do not believe that’s was the original intention in the series but it is here.