| Reviews for Oops |
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  Laura chapter 3 . 4/16/2003 Oh, come on. Don't leave us hanging here! Really, I liked the third chapter. The OOC wasn't bad either. You're better than most at keeping them in character. |
 Teh Natsu chapter 3 . 4/16/2003 UPDATE !E!its great |
| Lachesis chapter 3 . 4/16/2003 "She had made her bed and would now have to lie in it, even if it was currently InuYasha." That line is too good. :) I hope that the story has more angst before it has a resolution. |
| Mishisama chapter 3 . 4/15/2003 I am really enjoying the story right now. Its good. |
| Teh Natsu chapter 2 . 4/14/2003 AWW! I LOVE THAT!please hurry with the update i love it i love it i love it! |
| SoraMiru Ki chapter 2 . 4/14/2003 This is kool Please continue...o and no offense, just next time please make a lemon. Onegai! |
| Kagome51 chapter 2 . 4/13/2003 OMG! You are one great writer! I love the way you portray things and the way you go into such intimate detail. Man, I REALLY want to finish reading this! So, this, along with you, are going on my favs list! |
| Sapphire Sphinx chapter 1 . 4/10/2003 i think it's a vrey good start. please contine \ |
| DragonRose4 chapter 1 . 4/10/2003 I like this story please don't stop! The battle was short and to the point but it served its purpose. Time to get down to the main plot my dear! Happy writing adn don't worry aobut dissapointing anyone, you can't please everyone all the time. And most of the once you can't please are jackasses anyways! DragonRose |
| forbitten chapter 1 . 4/9/2003 Awesome start! I will definitely be waiting to read the rest! The only little lightning bug in a jar I can offer you would be that you could have described the monster more. I liked your writing style very much! It didn't take me too long on to really appreciate authors with plot AND grammar (I do sympathize with the bad spellers though! (*_~); ) Keep up the good work! |
| ChocoChocoChan chapter 1 . 4/9/2003 I understood everything. I didn't get the least bit lost. For example,:what? who did what? wait who said that? the monster did what!: Like I said that did not happen. I understand that you needed to explain how they got split up, so please do not worry I have seen much shorter chapters. Just please tell me, will Inuyasha and Kagome be announcing their love for each other? If perhaps you plan on that happening you must make it sutle. You know Inuyasha he's not one to come right out and say he loves anyone. I will be waiting for the next chapter so hurry hurry! |