|Reviews for The Commoner's Guide to Bedding a Royal|
| Kete chapter 34 . 10/15
Love love love love love love love love this
Love love love love love love love love you
| Hermy1213 chapter 24 . 10/14
I loveeeeeeeee your storyline, all the characters, and the description of all their dresses. I wish there are real picture for me to see all the dresses because I just can't get enough with a picture in my mind. lol
Bravo, you really nailed this one! Thank you for your efforts and time to entertain us.
| nestie chapter 43 . 10/12
I’m so entranced by your writing style, I read your fics on my way to work taking public transportation, on my way back home, during my lunch break, other breaks and any time I have free time. Now I was just in the shower thinking, “how can I read in the shower?”
This never happened to me before.
I’ve enjoyed wonderful stories but never to the point of wondering how to make my Ipad waterproof.
This story grabbed me from the first words. This first line is worthy of an entire publishing workshop. My favorite scene was when Hermione meets Daphne. The foreshadowing of a fully realized friendship from the get to is masterfully written. Pansy is so perfect and I was very grateful to get a Tracey Davies character arc.
This encompassed five novels in one fanfic and completely 180’d my reading experience. It made me want to come back to fanfic writing, gave me motivation to start writing original work again. It just breathed life into the writer that I am. My native language is French so I am super self-conscious about writing in a language that I haven’t mastered. Reading your words is kind of a “shit, how can I get to this level?” I’ve watched your videos and listened to examples of your writing schedule etc and I’m just ready to take on the challenge of bettering my craft like never before.
| Kete chapter 32 . 10/9
God I miss having a good cry with my gals. That was so perfectly written. And the phone sex, lord oh me oh my - I relate to this on a very strong personal level, having been in a long distance relationship for quite a long while. It was engaging and fun to read and gave me war flashbacks... god I hate long distance. Anyway! Lovely chapter
| Kete chapter 30 . 10/7
My god I love Pansy 3 I’m so happy to get her point of view! This chapter was so fun! Like fun is underrated, I had so much fun reading this chapter, my god does everything just make sense! How do you DO that? In awe, as always
| Kete chapter 28 . 10/6
God I’m glad I got over my reading-rut and decided to come back and finish this story. I love it. Like the ups and downs, the many freytag pyramids (see what i did there?), how you hold my (our) interests like a hypnotic toad. It’s great
| Kete chapter 26 . 10/5
“I’ve already fucked you haven’t I? Somewhere in your dreams, in your sleep, maybe you were wide awake”
This bit, this part right there was amazing.
I loved the Harry and Pansy part, to be honest I forgot who you paired Harry with if not Theo, and I am glad I forgot as I got to enjoy that a lot more. It was fantastic.
| Kete chapter 25 . 10/5
Heartwrenching, totally relatable, almost ALMOST made me cry there cuz I KNOW that feeling, and I’m sure a lot of other people do too. You are really really good at communicating things like this. Even if I’m not good at communicating at all :P
| Pharies chapter 43 . 10/1
I loved reading this. The banter, character development, and varied perspectives were perfect. I love your writing style. I can't wait to read more of your stories!
| Hellcats282 chapter 44 . 10/1
Cannot believe it's over ! It's not just dramione , I'm going to miss the whole group , their dynamic , the bad lads , the girl trio , and omg Blaise's points lol ! Who wins in the end though ? And of course , not to spoil anything , but is it possible for a magical universe to exist within this AU ? I had my doubts with Luna . And can I please please please put in a request for a spin off series on Hortense and Thibaut , they deserve one lol .
| Hellcats282 chapter 25 . 9/30
Omg I had to step away and furiously type out this review because omg you're the best writer out here and this fic has stimulated me to levels and I'm up at 3 AM right now , but I just had to let you know that I'm in love love love love with what you've wrote omg ! This fic has like the perfect balance and the character portrayals , the humour , hortense and thibault(because they deserve their own category) ,the ups and downs of life , the love scenes , friendships , brotherhood's sisterhood and ... Omg everything else ! I'm just going to be supremely nostalgic after leaving this fic, like after How to Win friends and Influence People , that I know ! Great work !
| Hetc chapter 39 . 9/29
This is great fun - snigger inducing, while at times unexpectedly moving. The introduction of minor character names is clever, eg Winky, Dobby sand Colin Creevey. I saw Minerva as the Meryl Streep character in the Devil Wears Prada, and Oliver is a joy.
The interactions between lovers and friends rang true, on a background of crippling/stifling protocol.
I will be sorry to finish it.
| Jily71102 chapter 43 . 9/29
Oh. My. God. I just cranked out reading this story over the last few days, and my god, I don't even know what to say. This is fucking incredible. I laughed, I cried, I smiled, and I felt my heart break a few times as well. I actually got over here from Amortentia, and honestly, you're just a really amazing writer. Each character is so deep and full, with so many perspectives, each storyline twists and turns and interconnects. I just want to be a part of their group! I absolutely loved the Pansy and Tracey chapters - really grounded the fullness of the rest of the story. I want my own royal prince now!
| Drsquirrel chapter 43 . 9/25
Super fun story. And OMG- what a twist at the end. I nearly lost it while reading at my desk at work, lol. Great work- thanks as always for the wonderful entertainment.
| Hermionemalfoy3 chapter 43 . 9/24
This is by far the best fanfic I have ever read. I really enjoyed the back and forth. Your writing kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time! Really good job, can't wait to read more of your wonderful stories!