Reviews for The Pinnacle of Evolution
raychii521 chapter 50 . 11/17
congratulations for 50 chapter's. Great story I think I have to go for a second read cause their's a lot I don't remember. But now I'm very curious what will happen next chapter and what will happen to poor 23 weak Cynthia she doesn't have real memory or accomplishmant. Do Shepard will discover about clone Sheperd early?.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/15
yeah now your are introducing multiple people that know the future ... congrats your story is dead ... also as an author i recommend you never wright anything ever again
Guest chapter 11 . 11/15
this music thing is so incredibly annoying ... why don't authors understand that music does not work with text ? is it really so hard to understand something so simple ?
Guest chapter 10 . 11/15
this is by far the worst chapter so far ... really as far as i can see your MC has done NOTHING right sofar ... just delete this crappy story already
Guest chapter 10 . 11/15
again with the wimpy character what is wrong with you ?
Guest chapter 8 . 11/15
yeah so the fate of hundreds of billions are on the line and he want's to save a handfull of people and is exited to save a few more at the battle of the citadel and talks about it like it would be some grand achievment ...what an idiot
Guest chapter 7 . 11/15
the incredible stupidity of your character is making this incredibly hard to read ...
Guest chapter 5 . 11/15
"pride for having a specter" ... yeah congrats for having a "anything goes" assasin to enforce "the law" ...

the entire specter idea is completly stupid from a gouverment perspective ... the gouverment is all about law and order keeping things under controll ... specters are completly outside that controll making them nothing but a problem for everyone involved
Guest chapter 5 . 11/15
really ? blaming himself for things he has no controll over ? how utterly predictable ... every single SI in ME blames himself for the galaxy ending regardless of the fact that they are only one person ... how about you write something that is not a complete cliché ?
Guest chapter 3 . 11/15
i have yet to read anything that would make this story intresting ...

all i see is a random person running around like a headless chicken with no goal or plan ... what is the point of this ?
Dr.equinox chapter 50 . 11/14
I'm interested in how the crew will react. Interesting lead up to the reveal, glad to see it come to fruition.
leon.richardsen chapter 50 . 11/14
Oh boy its Time where all (at least the Mass Effect ones) will be revealed. I am curious how the whole crew will react. :) once again a great chapter.
The Mad Author chapter 50 . 11/13
Can’t wait! So many SI stories either never do a reveal of the MC’s true origins (nothing wrong with that, just something I’d like to see more of) or they unfortunately go on hiatus before they get to that point in the story. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Tom712 chapter 50 . 11/13
nice
L3nNy chapter 50 . 11/13
finally, Shepard will experience the complete joke that is the movement in me1
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