Reviews for The Pinnacle of Evolution |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another one who can't spell "per se", can't get canon names like Ilos or Kaidan straight, misuses "point blank" … |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A real shame you added in multiple SIs, this was a really interesting premise and beating the reapers was already an almost insurmountable challenge. It would have be interesting to see where it went with the geth but instead it's now these avatars fighting each other. It doesn't help that our mc is a fuck up in every possible way every time, while the others seem to be hyper competent in their fields, and Shepard is a fuck wit. The mc could grow but with the rest thrown in it all feels pointless. Do we actually want the reapers to be beaten? These guys seem like they deserve to be reaped. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good work here. Although I admit that at times, Shepard seems to let his bias against Jordan blind him at times. In a way, he’s almost being hypocritical of what he preaches. I can also only hope that Jordan gains some very much needed self confidence and stand up for himself. Otherwise he may not last long and possibly fall down a very dark path. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work. I also in a way, liked Tela Vasir as well. She seemed like someone who indeed had her own code of honor yet also, the darker aspects of working with the Shadow Broker was a bit of a double-edged blade at the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad! Not bad at all! Loved this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rough first impression. Ugh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One hurdle conquered! Next on the agenda awaits! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Utterly fascinating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Niiice! Nuff said. After many hurdles, things are (for now) starting to look up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm…I can only wonder why the Catalyst wants Synthesis so badly that it would bring someone from another reality to the dimension of Mass Effect? I mean, I can’t really understand the Catalyst’s intention for such a thing. Is it an evil entity here? A neutral one? A good yet coldly logical being? Overall, I’m simply a bit confused in-general. I’m hoping this clears up a little down the line though. Can’t make any solid judgement yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start… |
![]() ![]() ![]() How much longer is the MC going to be this pathetic? You'd assume the pinnacle of evolution wouldn't be such a pussy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this so much! please update soon if you can, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving this |