Reviews for The Pinnacle of Evolution
Makarainen chapter 17 . 5/19/2024
Another one who can't spell "per se", can't get canon names like Ilos or Kaidan straight, misuses "point blank" …
Doccer chapter 1 . 5/2/2024
Reserve
jepoau chapter 13 . 5/1/2024
A real shame you added in multiple SIs, this was a really interesting premise and beating the reapers was already an almost insurmountable challenge. It would have be interesting to see where it went with the geth but instead it's now these avatars fighting each other.

It doesn't help that our mc is a fuck up in every possible way every time, while the others seem to be hyper competent in their fields, and Shepard is a fuck wit. The mc could grow but with the rest thrown in it all feels pointless. Do we actually want the reapers to be beaten? These guys seem like they deserve to be reaped.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 34 . 3/17/2024
Good work here. Although I admit that at times, Shepard seems to let his bias against Jordan blind him at times. In a way, he’s almost being hypocritical of what he preaches. I can also only hope that Jordan gains some very much needed self confidence and stand up for himself. Otherwise he may not last long and possibly fall down a very dark path.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 22 . 3/15/2024
Nice work. I also in a way, liked Tela Vasir as well. She seemed like someone who indeed had her own code of honor yet also, the darker aspects of working with the Shadow Broker was a bit of a double-edged blade at the end.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 17 . 3/14/2024
Not bad! Not bad at all! Loved this.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 10 . 3/14/2024
Rough first impression. Ugh.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 9 . 3/14/2024
One hurdle conquered! Next on the agenda awaits!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 8 . 3/14/2024
Utterly fascinating!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 7 . 3/14/2024
Niiice! Nuff said. After many hurdles, things are (for now) starting to look up.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 2 . 3/14/2024
Hmm…I can only wonder why the Catalyst wants Synthesis so badly that it would bring someone from another reality to the dimension of Mass Effect? I mean, I can’t really understand the Catalyst’s intention for such a thing. Is it an evil entity here? A neutral one? A good yet coldly logical being? Overall, I’m simply a bit confused in-general. I’m hoping this clears up a little down the line though. Can’t make any solid judgement yet.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 1 . 3/14/2024
Interesting start…
wtfchrlz chapter 5 . 9/11/2023
How much longer is the MC going to be this pathetic? You'd assume the pinnacle of evolution wouldn't be such a pussy.
luhenn chapter 1 . 8/31/2023
i love this so much! please update soon if you can, thank you!
evattude chapter 19 . 5/18/2023
I'm loving this
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