Reviews for The Pinnacle of Evolution
Tom712 chapter 8 . 7/19/2018
eh. still undecided. but it looks promising.
Eu sou um fa chapter 8 . 7/19/2018
Good job. Please, continue the great work.
Tom712 chapter 7 . 7/18/2018
just gonna follow this so i can see how it turns out.
ScepticalOne chapter 7 . 7/17/2018
Good job on the chapter. The Geth are a pretty interesting race.
BridgeBurn100 chapter 6 . 7/15/2018
Finally a "self insert" that doesn't have the OC joining the crew and not changing anything. I really do hope you will continue the AU aspect of this, especially to see how many people he can save.
ScepticalOne chapter 1 . 7/15/2018
Gotta love binge reading. A little late to the party but I put my money on Sheppard Romancing Tali. Outside of that, I look forward to the next chapter, Take your time if need be. even if you updated bi-weekly you'd still be one of the faster updating story that I follow.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/10/2018
Liked the first five chapters a lot. Eager to see where this goes.
jdude281 chapter 5 . 7/9/2018
In my mind, either Liara, or Tali would be the go to romances for Shepard. Of course I’m pretty bias in that regard. And for the SI, I think EDI might be a good fit. Don’t usually see her go with anyone else but Joker in these fics, so it would be pretty original, and it might be pretty fun as well.
Either way, I look forward to seeing more of these.
VODKA18 chapter 5 . 7/9/2018
Good story.
Jojo223210 chapter 5 . 7/8/2018
Great chapter I really love this story and for Shep pairing I was thinking Ashley and of course for Jordan he gets the cold blooded Miranda but anyways thanks for the awesome story it makes my day
gruntsbreeder chapter 5 . 7/8/2018
Good chapter interesting story
HeLiX159 chapter 5 . 7/8/2018
I think this is one of the best universe jump Mass Effect stories so far, it's realistic and still fun. Just carry on with your story, it is great! About the love interest I think that Jordan should get in a relationship with a Asari, for Shepard I don't really care which one you choose. But hey it's your story, make it your own way and don't listen too hard to the comments.
ScepticalOne chapter 3 . 7/7/2018
So your going to play the cliff hanger game? Fine, I can wait till ya update again. Also, if Jordan really wanted to screw off, he could try surviving until the andromeda initiative starts and just nope out of the galaxy. Just a thought.
ScepticalOne chapter 1 . 7/6/2018
I personally find the Synthesis option to be the best ending in the long run, assuming the catalyst isn't lying. I don't like the thought of executing genocide upon the Geth, or on any future species, might as well give them what they want and finally end it. I think this is going to be a fantastic story.
Xenozip chapter 2 . 7/6/2018
I think the vomiting was a bit much, people don't just throw up if they're scared, or there'd be a lot more vomit around when wars happen.
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