Reviews for Ordinary Lives
Junkette chapter 4 . 7/9/2018
I'm enjoying this so far, while it's obviously still Ranma you've done a lot of fun and cool things with the world that I don't see often. The only thing that I can say negatively is focus on what tense your actions take place in. I see a lot of good writers have trouble with this and while it doesn't hurt the story it can be awkward sometimes. Keep up the great storytelling~ 3
Davera chapter 3 . 7/8/2018
so far really good story
flairina chapter 4 . 7/7/2018
Huh. Ranma 1/2 toned down really puts it in a different genre entirely, doesn't it? Thankfully, it's a pleasant, and rather nicely written one all the same. I like all the allusions and nods to the series as it normally is, the redone backstories and meetings are interesting to see play out, and while I don't know much about Iaido or Chinese, everything seems quite well researched. All told, I'm thoroughly enjoying this thus far, and am eager to see more.
aliesterus chapter 3 . 7/7/2018
Alternatively, Shan Pu can also mean mountain. Pretty sure the writer knew exactly what she was doing when she named the girl...
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