Reviews for A Price to Pay |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read your story and this sequel and I loved it I really hope there will be a sequel soon as it's been a while since you updated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finished the first story and immediatelt went off to find the sequel. It’s fascinating! I see you are still writing. Hope you’ll make it back to finish this one some time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() more updates please am enjoying your work |
![]() ![]() As it's about 5yrs since last posting, may we assume this work is abandoned? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So... I guess this story won't be continued, which is a little bit sad, but I guess having read 4 chapters of the sequel is better then having read none. Though I have a question... Harry mentioned a book about a teleporting underage bankrobber. I could only think of the movie Jumper, but besides that have never heard about a book like that... Does a story like that actually exist? Because... I kinda want to read it. |
![]() ![]() This is a story I enjoy. So let me tell you how I want you to write it! : exactly however pleases you. :) Thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading it. Your OCs are imo great, your interpretation of nonOCs delightful, your nareative threads & mind-candy description enchanting, your sense of humor splendid. Again, tyvm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a great start to a story. I hope you one day update this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() pls update |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi, do you think that you'll update this story (here) one day ? maybe soon or not soon but in the dive next year ? I really like your story and I'm waiting the next chapter... I hope you're well. bye |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite, lovely and hilarious. I do hope you are alright. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story and how you have harry acting. i think it's awesome and cannot wait to read more and hope that u havent given this story up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant story hope you continue to write it. |