Reviews for A Price to Pay |
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Abriv chapter 2 . 1/1/2020 Can't wait to read more love your perspective its rather unique |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/28/2019 hi, hypotenuse. Nice play on words, I love your story, how funny would it be if Erised was actually a sane Voldemort |
Onyx Aven chapter 2 . 12/19/2019 I'm very glad you've decided to write this, and I find Erised and Harry's relationship simply charming. Thank you. |
Dark Neko 7000 chapter 2 . 12/9/2019 What will happen next time |
angela340278 chapter 2 . 12/7/2019 I really like ur characterization and changes to the plot. I wonder if Harry will befriend this horcrux. |
MargaritaS chapter 2 . 12/2/2019 oh no... i cant wait for more :) |
Rboooks chapter 2 . 11/13/2019 I just read the whole first part and these last two chapters and I ADORED it. Especially Harry's characterization. He is such a believable 11 year old with a bright mind and hilarious moments to boot. I especially love Erised. He's so perfect and I've never seen anyone use him this way. GOSH I LOVE HIM. I cant wait to read more! |
loleo chapter 2 . 10/27/2019 I Wohls really like to read more. Cool story |
OnaJB72 chapter 2 . 10/21/2019 Nice! I liked the update. Good personality. Excited about this continuation. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2019 Awesome stories. Hope all is well with you and that you found a job. Looking forward to finding out if Erised can do magic. |
noylj chapter 2 . 10/12/2019 Harry has the life-stealing horcrux, and you stop writing |
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 2 . 10/10/2019 this is excellent. i love it. i can't wait to see what happens with / to the diary. good work with this chapter. i always forget what a TSUNDERE GINNY was when she was younger. LMAO. i always found GINNY & HARRY romantic relationship creepy & unsettling for a number of reasons , 1. she was always described to be similar to LILY , who is HARRY MOTHER , you know red hair , has a temper , intelligent , the only thing different between them was GINNY being a Quidditch player. 2. GINNY was a HARRY POTTER FANGIRL. 3. HARRY saving her in the chamber of secrets & years later dating her kind of made her seem like she still was FANGIRL among other things. 4. the most akward part of their relationship for me is trying to imagine a conversation between them & than realizing that the only they have in common is A. Quidditch , B. being part of a WAR , C. BEING POSSESSED BY VOLDEMORT. so it gets weird. anyway UPDATE SOON. |
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 1 . 10/10/2019 this chapter was good. ERISED is totally the nervous mother hen type , isn't he. LMAO. hopefully he doesn't have a heart attack from HARRY being himself , as in you know how he gets into to bad situations no matter what. great work on this chapter. i can't wait to see what happens next. |
monkey kix ass chapter 2 . 10/8/2019 lmao, harry's impression of ginny is hillarious. wonder what harry will do with tom's diary. wonder if erised will do something with it, or if harry will somehow manage to turn diary tom into another friend. anyways, enjoyed reading what you've written so far. hope you get around to updating again soon. |
jon reeve chapter 2 . 10/3/2019 /Sooo, he's collecting Riddles? XD |