Reviews for A Price to Pay
Resurrection99 chapter 4 . 3/5/2021
Love this shit.
red-jacobson chapter 4 . 3/3/2021
Been binge reading this story (and the first story) since earlier this morning, and I'm enjoying it a great deal. I would suggest that you redo the summary of the first story though, because it really doesn't describe what happens.

I've added this story to my subscriptions, and I'll see you next time
Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 4 . 3/1/2021
I can't wait for the next chapter! Great story.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/1/2021
Hide it in Erised's lamp because it couldn't possibly cause any harm there? PANIC!

... on the other hand maybe Tom really will be eaten by the strange eldritch mirror and Erised can start using magic himself.
bkerrmom1 chapter 4 . 2/20/2021
I am looking forward to seeing what comes next !
Luiniliel chapter 4 . 2/11/2021
I am really enjoying the sequel. Great work
confusedw00kie chapter 4 . 2/8/2021
If the book jumper is anything like you reviewed in this chapter (awesome btw as usual) then it’s nothing like the Jumper movie and worth a read. Thanks.
vampireharry the 2 chapter 4 . 2/7/2021
Another wonderful chapter!
Kagugu chapter 4 . 2/6/2021
thank you
GainingWisdom chapter 4 . 2/6/2021
The first paragraph made me laugh - I see what you did there :)
KongouBongo chapter 4 . 2/5/2021
fun chapter, let slip the dogs of war :) thanks
fraewyn chapter 4 . 2/5/2021
Love it!
Commando678 chapter 4 . 2/4/2021
well you got me to buy jumler
jeskasaurus chapter 4 . 2/4/2021
loved the chapter but that 4th wall kinda ruined it lol I just skipped over it so not too fussed but i personally didn't enjoy that in the middle of a chapter haha.
DarkRavie chapter 4 . 2/3/2021
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
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