Reviews for One Soul,Two Bodies
Guest chapter 7 . 4/27
ok see this is where the story stops making any sense, they are not two different people he will be weaker if he allows part of him to be somewhere else, also why not just tell people about the semblance? it would be a very easy to explain and understand, all he is doing by continuing this lie is he is going to wind up causing confusion and people to doubt his word in the future
ArcticSword2030 chapter 1 . 2/26
Any update? I totally understand if life has been gettin to you and I hope everything is going okay. It would be great to hear from you again.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/2/2020
You doin okay? You haven’t posted anything in a while and I just wanted to check up on you to see if everything’s alright.
derpderpy360 chapter 16 . 12/2/2020
It’s been a while since you lasted posted anything, everything cool on your end? Hope life hasn’t gotten too bad and things are going well for you.
Guest chapter 16 . 9/30/2020
“Next chapter April 23”
So, that didn’t happen, I was just checking on fics I liked and got to this one, hope your alright. Take your time if life fought back
Onix121 chapter 8 . 8/3/2020
Port: BRAVO BRAVO
TRULY YPUR POETRY IS WITHOUT FLAW
Onix121 chapter 4 . 8/3/2020
Ha shot themselves in the foot!
Onix121 chapter 1 . 8/3/2020
Man things are gonna be awkward
I love it
Guest chapter 16 . 5/15/2020
Hey man, everything alright? It’s been a while since we’ve heard from you.
FanOfThisSeries chapter 16 . 4/30/2020
Really liking this story, it’s a very unique concept with a well done execution, can’t wait for the next chapter.
Paradoxreader chapter 16 . 4/17/2020
So glad i gave this story a chance...i hope the development goes to jaune guy side as well n not only his girl side haha...since all the great differment n good part seems to go to her...though i love the current character dynmaic n hope more jnpr dynamic, ren n nora be explored with their fearless leaderss haha...roman torhwick is also a interesting character n look forward to see how it develops haha
Fyr RedNight chapter 16 . 4/19/2020
Personally I think you did an amazing job with these chapters.
You cleverly made use of your one soul, two bodies mechanics.
Big Bad Beowulf chapter 16 . 4/15/2020
Hello good author, great chapter as always. Interesting way of fitting both brunswick, apathy and the mountain glenn scenes. Love how you alter it in the way the train didnt go off or having the people at the farm die. Though i can see how this could change more than in canon. Can't wait for the next chapter.
NineYetis chapter 16 . 4/15/2020
Thank you for the interesting backstory for Roman, I've never heard the like before.
I also liked Fem-Jaune's interaction with Neo, very amusing.
See you on the 23rd. Stay healthy.
Guest chapter 15 . 4/13/2020
Roman: Okay, so that’s it, you like her, that’s your excuse for saving this girl?
Neo: No. She can carry a tune to save her life!
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