|Reviews for But|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2018
Wow! Great fic! Hope you keep making more of these gems!
| Fire4Heaven chapter 1 . 7/13/2018
Like it so far especially wjat you done.
Also a correction to my other reviewer. No when used as titles mom and dad can be lower cased
As these are casual titles they don't revice capitalization.
There is a difference
| Keleri chapter 1 . 7/13/2018
HEY I snooped over from reddit. This is great, you really capture the sense of the countdown to church on the POV character and the disappointment that Shauna didn't get a romantic moment with the female player character. I think this will be a worthy entry to the contest. It sucks that we get potential moments of representation like this snatched away :( I hope it'll change in the future. ("Are you a girl? or a boy? or neither?" ONE DAY)
Small nitpick: when you use titles like Mom and Dad as names, they're capitalized, but in the generic "my mom/dad" they're lowercase.