Reviews for The Inevitability of Oversight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was really, really good, and I'm glad to see it's still being updated. I'm fairly sure that I initially read this fic after last chapter was posted, and I've been unable to access my notifications for a few months, so it's really cool to see new stuff. I really liked this chapter, too. Your characterisation of Master Windu is *chef's kiss*. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Greetings, salutations, and hello! I must say, first and foremost, that I have read all of the Sight stories, self-explanatory, if I'm reviewing this chapter, but...hehe..had to be said, but anyways, I digress...I haven't read any other time travel fics for the SW universe, until yours, and I find I rather enjoy the plot, premise and story line as you have presented them here! I look forward to reading more of your story for this, and I believe you indicated a 4th story for this...if I'm mistaken, then please don't take that as a demand for a 4th, LOL, but I am looking forward to more of this story, and I am planning to read some of your other stories as well! I must say, that when I have read in your AN about the trolls...yes...TROLLS...that complained, it made me mad on your behalf, because they are simply jealous! Jealous because they are unable to come up with a story such as you have, and can't make the changes like you have, and so they are taking that frustration out on you! I rather think that it takes guts and a good imagination to make the changes you have, and come up with the changes you have, so...I hope that the TROLLS that review will not bother you as much since again, their just jealous! I am hoping that this review finds you well, and continuing with ALL of your stories, and also your webcomic, and all your other creative outlets! TTFN |
![]() ![]() Hi! As always, I absolutely loved this chapter! The psychological part and the evolution of the relationship between Anakin and Mace are very interesting. Thank you for sharing this amazing story! I wish you all the best for your recovery. Take care :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect! You came back. And it is the opportunity for me to post my first review. First of all sorry for my english. I suck at learning another language (I'm from belgium qnd speak french). Your story is really good and I think it's the best star wars fiction I've read. I always found interresting the redemption of the dark side and how to manage it (and this question is always avoided in the movie because Anakin and Ben just die after their redemption...) This "adiction" version of the dark side is really interresting and I can't wait to read the following chapters. I see you've had some burn out problems. I work in a union and have to cope with this kind of problems with workers so I know how it can take a lot from you. So... May the Force be with you ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another brilliant installment! Great job! Well done! I love it! I am dying to know what happens next! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy to see a new chapter! Always happy when I see something new for this story. I still like this story very much and will continue to follow it even if it takes a lot of years. Also, I hope to see more of young Ahsoka :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woohoo, a new chapter! That's great :D First of all, thank you so much for the update. It sucks that you have had a bit of a burnout, I hope things are looking up again for you! Anyway, back to the chapter, it was good to see that information about Palpatine has gotten in the right hands and that something is going to be done with it. I'm so excited to see what kind of things are going to happen when the information gets out! The therapy session was great as always, and it gives some good insights. And then the scene with Mace, very interesting! You're setting something up again, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of it. Thank you very much for updating, I hope you update soon and keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() Out of Mace Windu, Yaddle or Adi Gallia, who will Anakin accept as a master? Or will he go for Siri? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Burnout sucks, but glad to have you back! Looking forward (as always) for what's to come! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im so happy to see this updated! It literally made my morning. Take care of yourself, your quality of writing is definitely worth the wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see you’re alive and well! I hope you’re well rested. Good Luck in all of your endeavors and God Bless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I really liked seeing Mothma’s perspective! I’m not surprised that she’s realized that the Jedi know something about Palpatine and fear him, which is why they were being so careful when slipping her the information. She wouldn’t be a politician and one who started the Rebel Alliance if she wasn’t clever like that. Distributing the information publicly and pretending it was leaked so she can address it from there is the best idea, definitely. Anakin struggling a little in his next therapy session makes sense. Of course, he’s going to be in shock right now. That makes sense. I really liked Girth explaining to Anakin why it’s understandable that he’s still struggling and having to address some of the same things repeatedly. Anakin’s session with Girth and Xio was awesome! I can’t blame Anakin for being a little nervous about talking to WIndu. Lol. It makes sense that Anakin would go to Windu about learning to master the ability to use both the Light and Dark at once. Anakin explaining about the Ones was a little funny for some reason, though. Anakin’s probably giving Windu a migraine. Lol. “The look Mace shot him couldn't have been more deadpan. "Yes." Loool. He’s not wrong. "I'm guessing you want my technique for channeling darker emotions without falling." Ooh, that’ll be a fun lesson, me thinks. Partitioning… yeah, I definitely see how it could be badly misused. I really liked Windu showing Anakin how to partition. I can’t wait to see what will happen next! I loved this chapter so, so much! :D:D:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. I’m glad you’re back at it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. |