|Reviews for In the Mist|
| Niva chapter 1 . 10/2
There is a quiet beauty in this. It's not long and drawn-out, it's very succinct and yet it packs a lot of punch. Scarlett and Rhett were always fiery and passionate, but I like that this shows the quieter sides of them. Scarlett's dream (to me) always played a bigger role in the book than is often acknowledged and you did a good job of expanding MM's version of the dream.
| heresvivi chapter 1 . 9/20
I really like this story. It brought Scarlett and Rhett together in a very lovely and uncomplicated way. Typically Rhett and Scarlett reunite in a ferocious burst of passion. Yet in your story one simple word, "stay", managed to have just as much of an emotional impact. Please continue this. I would love to see where Rhett and Scarlett go from here.
| TheKats chapter 1 . 9/7
Oh this is too good. You're talented writer. Please write some more GWTW. This is gentle and natural and isn't forced and has so much hope in it. Love it!
| gabyhyatt chapter 1 . 8/18
I love it it was great
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/7
Great story you’ve gotten the characters just right. Please continue- what happens the next morning?
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/20
I think this was really good. You did a marvelous job of conveying Scarlett's fear and Rhett's indifference. I would love to see more GWTW stories from you.
| Dgon12 chapter 1 . 7/18
Love it! is there more?
| Kinderby chapter 1 . 7/20
I love so much about this! I like the urgency that the present tense conveys, and how you show introspection without making Scarlett something she isn't. The ending isn't pat and too neat, just a little bit of hope that makes this very, very charming. Thank you for sharing!
| Melody-Rose-20 chapter 1 . 7/15
Beautiful story. I always hated their separation.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/14
This is absolutely lovely. It would be lovely if you'd continue, but even of you don't it's really nice and sweet.
| I Dream of Spring chapter 1 . 7/14
Really enjoyed it. A lovely 'what if'. I like how you left it.
| rhett's love chapter 1 . 7/13
Loved this story very much. I would be curious about how it would continue if you agree to
| Scarlett Rhose chapter 1 . 7/13
A nice story. Something a little different but familiar
| gumper chapter 1 . 7/13
Nice! Thank you...
So many missed opportunities for these two and I think it’s totally believable at this stage of the story that if Scarlett had just been able to swallow her pride a bit and given him an opening...he would have taken it.
It’s very fortunate that on this particular night he was not smelling of cheap perfume too... (-;
It remains to be seen, of course, if they would have managed to keep progressing to a permanent happy ending but they seem off to a good start with this crack in the ice!
I hope that you continue it...