Reviews for Annals of Arithmancy
B00kFan chapter 23 . 9/4
I've read this series at least 4 times, and I just now realized that Harry is still the master of the Elder Wand, with Draco killing Dumbledore and Harry killing Draco. I love that you worked it out like that, despite not pursuing the Deathly Hallows story line in Lady Archimedes and letting "sleeping crups lie", in this story. You're attention to detail is one of the things I love about your work, and I think it's great that I can still get something new out of it after rereading it a few times
Guest chapter 13 . 3/16
What does turn on a dime mean?
Guest chapter 8 . 3/16
No such thing as downtown london.
Guest chapter 7 . 3/16
You made Hermione very unlikeable, and the insistence on dragging religion into this story is absurd. HP isn’t set in backwards rural America, and the story would have been so much better without your indoctrination of Christianity
RoadDog1267 chapter 24 . 2/4
All I can say is WOW! I would love for there to be more! The Arithmancer series was so well done. It was difficult to follow the math, and quite frankly, I just read it without thinking too much into it. You are ammn amazingly talented storyteller. I've read most of your work and hope you can finish the Animangus at War series!
Ashfold chapter 9 . 1/31
Just an FYI, the date on the Hong Kong segment says 31 December 2000 where it should be 31 December 1999easy mistake with all the date changing in this chapter and I'd be shocked if you actually read this and cared enough to change it.

I've actually noticed a fair few very small typos etc on this readthrough of the series. If it's something that you're interested in, I could go back and compile the ones I remember and/or take notes of any I see in future and send through a PM when I spot them. Buuut I figure it's more likely at this point that it'd be more trouble than it's worth for you.
Ashfold chapter 7 . 1/31
Oh hey, I never noticed the Tim Minchin reference in the AN on this chapter. Neat.
Darren Jaguar chapter 24 . 12/25/2023
Just reread the full Arithmancer trilogy after a couple of years, and I just wanted to say something that has not changed since the first time.
This is the best long-form piece I've ever read in fanfic.
I'd argue it is better than most things I've read. Characterisation, slow build-up to solid pay-off. I eagerly look forward to reading some of your original work - if planned, that is, no pressure on that front. You do what you want.
Guess it's Animagus next, finally. :)

Thanks for your contribution to literature.
Spharex chapter 24 . 12/13/2023
Wow. I read all three Arithmancer stories over the last two or three weeks and I have to say they are great.
I've seen your Accidental Animagus recommended quite a bit, but this trilogy only the one time which lead me here, which is a shame. I haven't read AA, but after seeing your work with these stories I'll have to give it an honest try too.
The only blemish I can think of is that the comments about Elon Musk aged like milk, but you couldn't have known what was to come in 2019.
All in all, thank you for this great story
Guest chapter 24 . 11/11/2023
Hello,

I was keeping this story for when I wanted new inspiration. I read (I devoured) both stories about the Aritmanther and enjoyed them tremendously. And then this one was a bit of a surprised. Specially because I’m the age of the older children, Sasha, Columba, Marcus…
And then you wrote about 2020 and I was certain that you’ll make it so that the magic world would help the muggle one with COVID and reveal itself sooner and from a very positive point of view, like these great helpers with their breakthrough advances… but then I realised that you had written it in 2019 and it was impossible to know the future.
I like your ending. It’s just not as impressive as the one I proposed to myself in retrospective.
I think I’ve missed the original goal of this email, which is to compliment you on your amazing world building abilities and to thank you for all the knowledge you’ve poured into your story. As stated before, I’ve enjoyed them tremendously.
Best regards,

Duke of owlington
Spellflame chapter 24 . 8/24/2023
Is there anyone who took this on?
nikoladd chapter 16 . 8/22/2023
Ha-Ha-Ha movie night with The Thing on a station in Antarctica. This movie came out when I was a 9y old kid. A friend of mine, had seen it, and recounted it to me. He went to the movie theater with his much older sister. I had nightmares for quite a while back then. I watched the movie myself about ten years later and it was still unsettling enough. Apparently my friend did a good job at recounting the story in great detail, hence my nightmares.
The cat with blue eyes chapter 24 . 7/13/2023
a very nice ending to this trilogy! i really liked the fact that you took technilogy into account and how that will force their hand
odonnellzoo99 chapter 24 . 7/3/2023
I'm glad that I finally remembered to come back and finish reading the series.
odonnellzoo99 chapter 10 . 7/1/2023
I was wondering when that was going to happen.
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