Reviews for The Killing Goku Maximizer |
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![]() ![]() Absolutely mad. Fascinating, but mad. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
![]() ![]() I loved the story. The only parts that didn't make sense were the "Majin Cells" I realize that time travel was involved but how did: 1. The planet survive a Final Flash 2. The computer create and use and power a time machine in the measly amount of time and resources it had left? Also, just going by Dragon Ball logic, the Omni King cannot be controlled by anyone with less power or else some random wizard would have enslaved him and ruled the multiverse. Wait... Midoriya isn't a weakling! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved reading this and even read through Friendship is Optimal. Though it was not what I was expecting, I think the idea of this kind of A.I. to be fascinating.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy Shit. This was beautiful and scary, for all that Dragon Ball logic wouldn't allow it to get this far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. Great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I thought the system would've used biological weapons on goku, like creating a more advanced version of the heart virus that killed him in the alternate timeline. All's well and fine until the system meets Saitama...though it might do the same to him as the king of all? but the king of all has pretty weak will though. Plus fighting forever gets boring, eventually. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now an entire timeline has to be destroyed or all of existence is at risk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is exactly the thing that the smartest people of earth have nightmares about. AI and self-replicating machines. Against this... what can anyone do? Even the characters of Dragon Ball would be fucked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 0_o wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() This would make for an amazing plot in Dragon Ball Super, but for Bulma's genius to somehow save everyone this time instead of basic fighting. The thought of Hero's hatred pulsating so much that it grows to an extent like this is interesting. I wish there was a similar plot of this in Dragon Ball somewhere. Well done. The writing had very little mistakes and the mistakes that I saw mattered not much. Overall, writing was phenomenal. Man, there needs to be an Arc like this, lol. Great job. |