Reviews for Naruto: Redone
Mr.Darkrai chapter 66 . 5/6
Love you man for bringing this back really loved the chapter,please try to finish the ’t hang us in the middle of love
Guest chapter 16 . 5/1
in your comment, you said you identify with Sakura more than Naruto and Sasuke I believe that was part of the point of the character her and rock. Lee are the most normal characters in the entire series.
Guest chapter 66 . 4/29
Amazing writing! It’s clear/concise. Hoping to see Sakura soon (and narusaku pls! I’ve suffered enough…lols)
HyperPanda101 chapter 66 . 4/28
Damn. I understand how by Naruto defeating the other bijuus, he's saving Konoha, at the expense of keeping the cycle going. Unlike canon, he's just like every other shinobi who wants to stop the cycle but revenge and self-preservation takes the place of forgiveness. And unlike with Nagato, Iwa and other villages have no problem in continuing the cycle. Sad. Well, good chapter, long time coming. See you next time.
Guest chapter 65 . 4/15
Have ino help Naruto and Sakura get back together since she knows Naruto and Sakura the most she needs to have Sakura see just how much he's really hurting him and how broken and see that he's a shell of his former self without her around like he used to be she was the reason he keeps pushing himself further to get stronger to help keep him positive and live a happy life he always wanted with her and now with the way she's ignoring him and giving him the cold shoulder because of something he did that wasn't even his fault because he had no control over himself and even broke a promise he made to her when she said she always be by his side and not face these hard times and challenges alone like he always had since he was born she needs to realize her mistake and fix it fast before it's too late because Sakura is hurting him way more than she even realizes and it's up to ino to get her to wake up and open her eyes and get back together with Naruto and become a happy couple they were once before but better and stronger than ever and if Naruto falls to far in the darkness it be her fault because of the way she treated him because of one mistake that wasn't directly his fault she has alot of making up to do please just have them get back together sooner than later it's been long enough since they got separated since that incident happened they have to talk things over and ino needs to make sure that happens they both need a wake up call letter them have the happy ending they both wanted together
SumWon chapter 1 . 4/16
Seems like an alright basic premise but it ruins itself halfway through the first chapter, then obliterates what's left in the second.
Mansib N Alam chapter 65 . 3/28
Bring it back man,can’t wait to hear the rest
Guest chapter 65 . 3/16
Please continue the story,don’t abandon it
TsukuyoGintoki chapter 4 . 3/3
her mental strength was second to none when compared to Naruto and Sasuke. what does that even mean?

I'm assuming you mean she isn't mentally ready? idk
TsukuyoGintoki chapter 4 . 3/3
that was ridiculous. I don't care how good Naruto is. as a genin on his first mission he should not be telling Kakashi what to do.
TsukuyoGintoki chapter 2 . 3/3
this makes no sense. why would Kakashi go to them instead of saving Naruto himself? that is a pretty big flaw in the story.

I like this story but that just doesn't make ANY sense. if you wanted Jaraiya to save Naruto then it would have been better if a different Shinobi alerted them.
The Dude Himself chapter 65 . 3/2
Just finished and loved the story! I hope you continue on with it. 9.5/10
Independent-bell6080 chapter 65 . 2/13
Naruto and Sakura are gonna work things out right?
LordLordyLord chapter 1 . 1/25
Don't really know how I made it past chapter three last time. My standards must have been lower.

Sounds super generic other than the fact that you've already hinted at romance (which usually isn't a good sign), and you've given Naruto a bunch of random opportunities to make him strong with no context. So it reads like a Gary Sue fic. There are ways to make an Overpowered Naruto fic enjoyable. This isn't it though.

And as for my last comment, some weird autocorrect feature f'ed that up. Rogue is pronounced "row-guh", though without as much emphasis on the 'guh' part. I remember that being a pet peeve of mine.
Guest chapter 64 . 1/22
I really hope Sakura and Naruto talk this issue out they just can't keep ignoring each other like this they need to make up for what they did accident or not plus Sakura needs to realize and understand just how sensitive heart broken and how depressed and sad he's become since they last saw each other how hurt he was by her and it's a mistake only she can fix after seeing narutos broken state and a shell of his former self I know after they both some how over come there the obstacles there facing I know Naruto and Sakura bond love and friendship will grow even stronger than ever like the old saying goes what dosent kill u will only make you stronger I just really want to see those two end up together again and make up for all the time they missed since this whole thing began they deserve to have a happy life together I know the way things are is a very difficult time for them but it will help them grow and mature more and if anyone can help Naruto and Sakura back together it definitely be ino since she knows how much there both suffering right now but she knows narutos going through it alot harder than her and it's up to ino to make her realize just how much he's hurting right now and needs her back in his life again like before and also snap her back to her senses as well before it's too late
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