Reviews for Naruto: Redone
kratos264 chapter 28 . 6/9
This is such bas writing “oh look orochimaru is in danger but dont worry anytime theres risk they can insta teleport away” like jesus youve done this like 5 times in 10 chapters its so stupid
kratos264 chapter 18 . 6/9
I just cant understand how naruto struggles with any of these genin…. Like sasuke gets CRUSHED by the sound four and none of them are close to zabuza… what was even the point in showing off narutos strength to then weaken him immensely later in the story
kratos264 chapter 16 . 6/9
This fight makes no sense you ruined it with the writing earlier how the hell could he months prior fight zabuza yet struggle with neji. While the rookies are strong i dont think any of them are stronger than zabuza and yet hes strugglingn against neji after months more training and btw you have him expliot the shadow clones but what does he even learn? He legit hasnt once used a real jutsu or seal in the entire exam? Is he just a worse rock lee with a rasengan?
kratos264 chapter 10 . 6/9
This says naruto redone but honestly almost nothing has changed from him being op, might as well of skipped half this stuff if you were going to keep the cannon
Gunato the Great chapter 77 . 5/7
Great chapter. Great incorporating Minato I kind of wanted Minato to leave some secrets of Hiroshima for Naruto but beggars can’t be choosers. Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 77 . 5/6
After the war ends Naruto and Sakura should definitely make up for all the times they missed being together and do stuff alone together that they missed doing or wanted to do but couldn't because of one thing happening after another that kept them busy and distracted one place Naruto should definitely take Sakura to so they can both rest and relax after everything that's happened and release there stress and the weights they feel on there shoulders as well as the side effects from all that fighting they done during the war is by having him take her to the hot springs where it's just mainly them and do some fun activities together while their over at the hit springs
Krieger Techpreist chapter 77 . 5/6
God... why did you have to bring in THATclone wars qoute, Im so fucking depressed right now
Guest chapter 76 . 4/14
I've just finished the chapter and already I crave the chapter 77 and the next one, and another etc.
Tsunade's gonna have a heart attack when she'll see Jiraiya-Pain.
Guest chapter 76 . 4/14
I've just finished the chapter and already I crave chapter 77 and the next one, and another etc.
Tsunade's gonna have a heart attack when she'll see Jiraiya as another Pain.
Guest chapter 76 . 4/14
Felicissima del suo ritorno! Capitolo fantastico, lo scontro tra Jiraiya-Pain e Naruto è un colpo al cuore, ma, fortunatamente, almeno Tsunade non è lì per vedere come gli orfani di Ame hanno infierito su Jiraiya.
Non vedo l'ora di leggere il prossimo capitolo, spero solo che il ptossimo non si farà attendere così tanto.
Sahamosveb chapter 11 . 4/15
How simp Naruto is for Sakura is simply disgusting. It's even worse than in canon. There he was at least stupid and didn’t understand how pathetic he was. The rest of the fanfiction is excellent. I wish the author all the best and good luck.
RageofKratos99Tur chapter 76 . 4/12
phenomenal chapter so happy that you are back. waiting for the next one
Gunato the Great chapter 76 . 4/12
Brilliant chapter
Guest chapter 75 . 4/7
when is the next chapter coming
Aedwards179 chapter 5 . 3/12
there is literally 0 chance a man like gato can get classified files from a hidden nija village...
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