Reviews for All According to Plan
mumphie chapter 34 . 5/8
A very interesting story! I do hope Harry works through his confusion, experiments a tad, and leans toward having a relationship with someone who can actually bare him little Potters to carry on the family name and magic. The lad is only 13. He has plenty of time to learn and grow!
mumphie chapter 8 . 5/6
I hope Harry was able to catch a ride with one of the Hippogriffs. I know this isn't a Harry-centric story, but I always want him to have SOME fun.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/10
Fucking hell this is the greatest Bella Au I’ve ever read. I love her attitude
IamZort chapter 34 . 1/30
This story was amazing!
The plot is intricate, yet decently paced, it‘s deliciously original, but you made the effort to include some parallels to canon, like including a Trelawney Prophecy at the end, and all the characters are so well thought out and have actual depth. And the worldbuilding is amazing, too.
I‘ve read many professionally published books that imo wouldn‘t hold up to your quality, so thanks a lot for writing and sharing.
I guess some people would find the constant tangents the characters go off on annoying, but I‘ve always been partial to such things, which is probably why I‘ve enjoyed this story more than its current popularity suggests.
marvinkitfox1 chapter 10 . 1/9
It is so refreshing to read about a Bellatrix that is not insane...

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erm, let me rephrase that.

It is so refreshing to read about a non-psychopathic Bellatrix...

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ugh. still wrong.
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a non evil Bellatrix?
erm... avatar of Eris. NEver mind, very definition of evil.
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a..., a... , a *more sociable*, but still very insane, evil Bellatrix. Yes, that fits the bill.
locutes chapter 16 . 1/1
the story is absolutely amazing, and it's even better for not in fact being a crackfic! Please keep up the good work!
Aratherfluffyfatcat chapter 18 . 11/25/2021
Enjoying the story thanks
Rune Tobor chapter 19 . 9/14/2021
Brevity?

A Major failing of the Harry Potter series is we only learn what Harry sees and hears.
This limits world building and leaves us with an incomplete understanding of the story.
It does not help that Ron is LAZY and pulls Harry down to his level.
Harry does not ask questions enough, that was probably beaten out of him by Vernon.

A Hero coming from a humble start is fine, Luke is no none special at the start of Star Wars.
A hero who is abused as a child does not happen. Anakin the slave became Darth Vader!
Tom Riddle became Voldemort.

What was Rowling thinking?!

Answer

She was not thinking at all.

Great imagination ... abyssmal cogitation.
Rune Tobor chapter 18 . 9/13/2021
Rowling did quite a few unintened things.
I doubt she planned to make Albus EVIL, but she did by his inactions and deeds.

Bad at maths often means bad at planning or critical thinking.

Dumbledore set the Potters up to die. (Them or the Longbottoms)
He hid them behind a charm with a fatal flaw.
And if you need PROOF, he took the cloak of invisibility from them.

At the very least Lily could have silenced Harry, hid both of them under the Cloak, and escaped while leaving a decoy doll baby with a bomb in it.

Albus Dumbledore may not intend to be evil but his behavior says he is evil.

His road to hell is paved with greater good intentions.
Rune Tobor chapter 17 . 9/13/2021
Dumbledore deserves anything and everything Lyra and Eris do to him!

He knowingly put Harry in an abusive environment!

CHILD ABUSE IS EVIL.
ALBUS IS EVIL.

One of the few things Rowling got right was killing the manipulator.
Rune Tobor chapter 15 . 9/13/2021
Dumbledore is the worst of Dark Lords, he ruins your life saying it is for the greater good.

God does not meddle, mislead, or manipulate people like Albus does.

For all the deaths he did nothing to prevent while trying to redeem death eaters Dumbledore is Damned. His next great adventure will be in hell.
Rune Tobor chapter 14 . 9/13/2021
Agreed

Harry however has good reason for being silly.

Brain damage from Petunia hitting him in the head with a frying pan.

Vernon abusing him, Dudley beating him.

Was Rowling abused as a child? She tortures Harry without mercy.
Rune Tobor chapter 12 . 9/13/2021
Very nice microcross.
I read all of Lovecrafts horror stories when I was young.
I even has a Miskatonic U. sticker on my car!
Rune Tobor chapter 11 . 9/12/2021
Short chapters are much better than no chapters.

That said the minimum lenght for best readability seems about 1000 words.

I have seen shorter and the fic gets very choppy and disjointed.
Rune Tobor chapter 9 . 9/11/2021
It is a good thing Alan Rickman is dead.
Making a man who enjoyed torturing a child a hero has surely damned his soul.

FAERY HEROES rewards Snape properly.
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