|Reviews for All According to Plan|
| Boots chapter 34 . 5/14
One of the best stories I've read in a VERY long time
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/10
I love Bella's character and this story. But after a while it gets kind of boring re-reading her secrets being told, the pacing was dragged imo. But it's not your fault though. I do think it'll be better if other than Bella, others have more prominent characteristics too. While ofc she's the main character, I like the challenge when the world still doesn't revolve around said character, even if they attract trouble and conflicts just the same. Sorry for the long rant.
| Kirkegaard chapter 34 . 4/6
I liked your story, great work. And i looks forward to read the next part
| TricMagic chapter 34 . 3/27
All according to plan.
Ah, this has been a great read, thanks for writing it. Looking forward to the next.
| jh chapter 12 . 2/14
| hbvierq chapter 13 . 2/14
I don't use that many brackets() in my math homework, let alone seen it used in a book.
Either you want to include a sentence (or information) in your story (or not), stop pushing the decision upon the readers (or don't), because it's annoying (and stupid). And yes, I see the irony (or is it sarcasm) of this statement (because it's [freaking] done on purpose).
| hbvierq chapter 13 . 2/14
I don't use that many brackets() in my math homework, let alone seen that many used in a book.
Either you want to include a sentence in your story or not, stop pushing the decision to the readers (or don't) because it's downright annoying (for some), and yes, I see the irony (or is it sarcasm) of this statement (because it's [fucking] intentional).
| hadababa chapter 4 . 2/13
No matter how divergent timelines, Bellatrix Black would never proclaim herself to be a daughter of squibs and muggles. It goes against everything in her character and family honor, the honor she is trying to bring back.
| Raleon chapter 2 . 1/19
Wow I just can’t stand Bellatrix in other Bellamione fics a lot has to be rewritten to make her even somewhat redeemable... but all the stuff that made her Bellatrix is still there and I hat her blood purist rhetoric... it truly reeks of eugenics and white power. So unless she gets a reality check I’m not going to put up with her or her antics.
| Guest chapter 24 . 11/14/2020
I’ve never really read a portrayal of Grindelwald as a Communist before- usually he’s a fascist or using muggle fascists for his own ends. That’s an interesting subversion of the usual tropes.
| Edgeofdoom chapter 4 . 11/10/2020
Ministry logic: Sirius Black escaped from Azkaban, which is guarded by dementors. He is suspected to be heading for hogwarts. So OBVIOUSLY dementors have to be sent to guard hogwarts against Sirius
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2020
Oddly difficult to get into, maybe it's the rambling tone/vibe of it all? Arbitrarily changing the names of canon locations is kind of dumb. I get it, but it's dumb. Don't do that.
| rmw5763 chapter 33 . 8/4/2020
Great story. Those stupid ass Brats are soooooo screwed, lol. They Deserve every little thing she does to them,lol.
| rmw5763 chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
Mu ahhhhhh Haha ! Great reading. Thank ye.
| Warrof chapter 1 . 6/17/2020
Interesting story. Though not quite my speed. Too verbose.
A good read so far though!