|Reviews for All According to Plan|
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/5
Good plot and good expansion. Only your excessive and completely unseemly use of F.. word spoils the story like stones in a delicious pie. If you think it makes the story badas .. you are completely mistaken. It is plain ridiculous. A scion of ancient and noble family from 1960s with all the stiff decorum using such guttersnipe language.
Seriously is your vocabulary so poor?
| Flametusk chapter 24 . 6/15
You know what? Even if there are some... less than pleasant things referenced, this story is just... fun. This is very fun.
| Freddie Rindklip chapter 31 . 6/8
I have enjoyed rereading this fic. Thank you for writing.
| Alpenwolf chapter 34 . 1/8
Sometimes it's just nice to see Albus understand what kind of dumb things he did and that he is not infallible.
Lyra changing the status quo, just for a bit of chaos, is just amusing to read. I cant not love her.
| just.vee chapter 3 . 12/5/2022
I don’t understand why you fully spell out 1963 instead of putting it in numbers. There’s really no need to spell it out if you’re dictating a year unless the context was Bella telling Blaise to write something down… yeah, I just don’t get why all the years are spelled out. That’s weird, dude.
| kreintoray chapter 1 . 9/29/2022
Mr. Orange from Reservoir Dogs will speak for me. "Joe, I don't have the slightest fucking idea what you're talking about"
| Freddie Rindklip chapter 28 . 8/2/2022
A long tale. Too wordy for me, but then my loss.
| jaqmaq77 chapter 34 . 5/23/2022
Oops... I know I said it wasn't complete back in chap 7... (I read this chapter first, and it just doesn't look complete...) okay, back I go n read it properly... think I'll go back to chapter one... then I'll review the later chapters... give the story a fair chance to hook me...
| jaqmaq77 chapter 6 . 5/23/2022
Ye gods and little fishes... I have watched treacle run down a desk quicker than this story... it's a Dolly Parton story... it's got interesting bits, but so ponderous, it's like watching an elephant climbing a tree... I will try a bit more because this apparently demon or god possessed Bella is an interesting idea... I know it will probably never get finished in my lifetime, (I'm 70...) but you never know... one a few years ago had an 8 year gap...
| mumphie chapter 34 . 5/8/2022
A very interesting story! I do hope Harry works through his confusion, experiments a tad, and leans toward having a relationship with someone who can actually bare him little Potters to carry on the family name and magic. The lad is only 13. He has plenty of time to learn and grow!
| mumphie chapter 8 . 5/6/2022
I hope Harry was able to catch a ride with one of the Hippogriffs. I know this isn't a Harry-centric story, but I always want him to have SOME fun.
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/10/2022
Fucking hell this is the greatest Bella Au I’ve ever read. I love her attitude
| IamZort chapter 34 . 1/30/2022
This story was amazing!
The plot is intricate, yet decently paced, it‘s deliciously original, but you made the effort to include some parallels to canon, like including a Trelawney Prophecy at the end, and all the characters are so well thought out and have actual depth. And the worldbuilding is amazing, too.
I‘ve read many professionally published books that imo wouldn‘t hold up to your quality, so thanks a lot for writing and sharing.
I guess some people would find the constant tangents the characters go off on annoying, but I‘ve always been partial to such things, which is probably why I‘ve enjoyed this story more than its current popularity suggests.
| marvinkitfox1 chapter 10 . 1/9/2022
It is so refreshing to read about a Bellatrix that is not insane...
erm, let me rephrase that.
It is so refreshing to read about a non-psychopathic Bellatrix...
ugh. still wrong.
a non evil Bellatrix?
erm... avatar of Eris. NEver mind, very definition of evil.
a..., a... , a *more sociable*, but still very insane, evil Bellatrix. Yes, that fits the bill.
| locutes chapter 16 . 1/1/2022
the story is absolutely amazing, and it's even better for not in fact being a crackfic! Please keep up the good work!