|Reviews for What One Can Do Alone|
| elouise17 chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
excellent well written fic with adama dn brennan as the central characters but the rest of the team are there as well.
hope youw rite more.
thanks for sharing.
| Ruffyan chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
That was a marvelous story. very realistic and it flowed well. Characters were, well, in character. I didn't mind that the plot had some typical elements, after all, that's the Mutant X that I grew to know and love. You introduced some excellent new ideas like the non-mutant SDG and the contingency plan in case Sanctuary was ever captured. I don't remember ever seeing that on the show. Great story. Gotta run now.
| Colorain chapter 1 . 4/11/2003
Well, that was . . . amazing. What I *wish* the writers of the show would have done - it would make a great season or series finale.
I also admire you putting it all into one long chapter - you run that risk of people wimping out before they're done or not reviewing at the end. Awesome job. :D
| leech chapter 1 . 4/11/2003
nice story. nice balance of all characters.
i'm impressed...another story on the way?
| deichtine chapter 1 . 4/10/2003
Thanks for the great reviews! And thanks for the constructive criticism. I knew the plot was predictable, but I thought ppl might enjoy it anyway. When I first wrote it it was more just for something to do while killing time on the bus - I didn't intend to post it anywhere. That's one reason why it was posted whole - I wrote it over a long period of time, and completed it long before I started to read other MX fanfiction.
Question: Is there interest in a sequel?
| Samm chapter 1 . 4/10/2003
one word: wow!
Well-written good plot although slightly predictable still very interesting!
| ItalianchiKE chapter 1 . 4/10/2003
I read this story on your website and totally loved it. I am glad that you posted it here so that other people can read it.
| rose chapter 1 . 4/10/2003
wow, this is a great epic. you used all the characters and kept them realistic. the plot could have been a little more original though. good job, i can't wait till you write another mx fanfic! D
| Empath-Child chapter 1 . 4/10/2003
WOW! that was good, i love when they make fun of Brennans cooking lol so good.
| Sunstar2 chapter 1 . 4/10/2003
Nice, very nice. I liked the idea of a non-mutant governor, surprising that GenomeX never came up with that because it's actually quite a good idea-I suppose they've just got used to dealing with mutants all the time that it was never really considered. I remember someone somewhere making reference to Shal being implanted with a governor and the result it would have on her because her feral abilities are such an integral part of her physiology. It was a really good story though it might have been better split into smaller chapters because it is quite a long read. Plus you would have the added bonus of getting lovely death threats every time you stopped at a cliffhanger! ;-
Apart from that I loved it-hope to see more of your stories soon.