I do like this story and hope there is an update soon. Goddess of Love hear my pleas. Lol

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job

You do know it's Horcruxes plural not Horrorcruxes also it's Angelina Johnson not Angelica Jones as well as Avada Kedavra not Kadabra if these were just simple mistakes that's ok, but i feel like it happened several times in the story so you might want to double check just in case. Happily waiting for more chapters. Good job for an interesting story and keep it up Another Time.

Wow 30 chapters before they even board the train to hogwarts

Remus and narcissa? Thats a really bad pairing...

This is REALLY hard to read. I had to give up.

Loved Harry's entrance to both schools. The grammer and sentence structure needs a lot of work. However, that said this is a great read once my brain fixes the problems so I know what's going on.

Awesome Fan Fic. Thanks for the chapter.

This is a Hot Mess of bland porridge spilled on the floor. Your mixing of tenses makes it almost impossible to read. You have Gods talking about things they know well only as a way to inform the reader. That is the Narator's job. This needs so much editing to make it readable.

Are you A.S.?

Hi

Good chapter

I'm not sure if you are doing it on chronological real time or not but i think the pope was john paul II not III, in fact he doesn't exist, nor existed.

About the cardenal, is he going to join in some way voldemort his fanatism is troubling, the apparicion of an angel to him and explain that his actions are going to condenm him would be great, just hope he doesn't become the new pope on this story.

When are they gonna find the ring or the diary, and or eliminate the living vessels of power of voldemort

Bye, and update soon

Love your idea for the story but your writing style is not for me it feels impersonal I can't connect with the characters

Young hormonal girls out for pain update soon

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Interesting.

What are you going to do with snape, along with umbridge? she wanted the wand that is in dumbledores possession, if i where to do something (using amelia bones) i make the aurors seach both fudge and umbridge offices and houses for evidence to take them out of the way.

Also what are you going to do with skeeter.?

What are the missing horcruxes again, name it all so we know what are they and how many are left to destroy (on the fic) i belive that many of us are asking this..

Bye and please update soooon