These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook

I was a mess reading this.

Finally got around to reading chapter 2 I absolutely loved it

Ohhh me encanta, que bien capitulo

God this is so beautifully written. Heartbreaking, genuine and tragic I love it.

Fantastic writing : )

Could you do a sequel? No pressure just asking.

I loved this story. I especially loved how you made the characters stay authentic, I really do think that Dick would punish himself and gets so overstressed to the point where he'll just do anything. And Wally is so understanding, but he's firm and just willing to stay for Dick, and he won't leave him without a fight.

So overall, I really enjoyed this story and I can't wait to see more of your stories in the future!

This is so good and amazing and wonderful!

Please say there will be more to the story.

Oye genial la historia pero que pasó luego ! Please no puede soltar una bomba así y Luego no saber cómo va a reaccionar Wally

Fantastic writing: ) the twisted plots are some of my favorites : )