Great read, thanks for sharing~ I'm not sure if this'll be picked up again, but if not it was a pretty sad ending and likely the story of many wards in Worm. :'(

Poor kid, if it was not for bad luck she would not have any luck at all. I think that one of her powers is to attract bad luck.

No, you're still not a woman. 8D

Strange that the heroine so easily accepted that her friend was in the wrong - just on the basis of "I swear! We are good guys! We did the right thing!". I understand - teenagers. %( But why didn't she even ask something like "weellll... I believe you. Now please tell me what the everlicking fuck actually happened".
Slutty Supervillain was hilarious. :) I hope she gets more screen time later.
The cliffhanger is good. Also shows how oblivious the heroine can be. ;)

You gotta love this kid...Talk about thinking outside the box and good lateral thinking. This has got to be one of the more unorthodox ways of winning. I think that the villains are going to have good reason to worry Knock off is crazy.

Enjoying this story, please continue.

Start is not bad. Main character is certainly original, language is good . We'll see how it develops.