Reviews for When Dawn Breaks The Night |
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![]() ![]() Neither Sirius or Peter know anything about mugged so He should've ignored them plus decorating the tree and House is such great fun singing carols all he needs to Do is relax and chill out forget meeting his father and Be his charming self after an petunias Quite lovely now it's refreshing to see but his father Sounds very similar to lucius Malloy cold bloodedly Ruthless and uncaring poor James he's got it tough Yet Lily's brightening his dreary life with her laughter Smiles friendship protection I'd love to see him give His first really great belly laugh it could work wonders As a relaxant it's the greatest her Mother can understand his nervousness since apart From his close friends Lily's his only female friend I'm very excited by how your magnificent thrilling Quirky sarcastic beautiful zany touching complex Discerning honest forthright adventurous challenging Paradoxical love story is creating an utterly unique Journey which I'm loving going on its incredibly Delightful loads of fun highly interesting bewitching Remarkable in every way yet the wonderful angst Comes through among excellent well written sentences Filled with imagination power unforgettable greatness It's wicked plus you're a genius so thank you so very Elizabeth skinner. |
![]() ![]() Oh that's sweet James is trying so hard to make a good Impression but he doesn't know that in the muggle World we usually freeze to death unless your lucky To live somewhere sunny,but Millie's starting to really Get on my nerves similar to crazed bellatrix it's not James fault so if she could lose the mouthy spoils Bratty attitude or she will lose Lily's friendship .but it Will be fine away from his parents he can laugh,sing And enjoy his first real Christmas which is a must for Everyone actually the main reason this has become My favourite jilly romance is that there's no nastiness In it yes they have the usual angst yet they're becoming Friends with lots of exciting dramatic tension added and You have brought a fresh spin on it congratulations this Is utterly brilliant classy amidst great friendship but on The other hand there's extreme challenges to be faced And plenty of very amusing phrases making it totally Captivating enthralling sensitive unique plus unforgettable in such a magically wondrous creative Way from you a truly imaginative writer thank you So very Elizabeth skinner. |
![]() ![]() I noticed one tiny mistake in this chapter Sirius had. A Younger brother called regulus. Black he loathed as he Chose not to be in gryffindor plus he hated his parents So he wouldn't have gone back there, and I just love Christmas it's truly wonderful but hog warts is great at Xmas but lily has a truly sneaky plan up her sleeve though she will need some help from Remus and Sirius To get James on board he's very disillusioned yet trying Hard to be his usually bright happy self it's sad but he Will survive this in true gryffindor something very exciting happening between these two It's beautiful to read about them being friends first and You really do have a gift for writing this genre it just Shines through golden as the sun yet there's high drama Adding to more marvellous brilliant storylines from you I'm totally stunned by the outrageously bewitching plot Lines that are extremely. Fascinating puzzling while being compassionate also but it might be time for some Uninterrupted romantic moments to come for lily and James soon after all it's Christmas time when miracles Occur but once again thank you so very much for this Unforgettable love story with a unique Elizabeth skinner. |
![]() ![]() I'm not certain why she didn't go but there's nothing Wrong with it and if other people want to cause trouble Then let them hopefully they can get past this road hump with out to much yelling which would please Mildly Amos and Severus but it would turn James darker Than his supposed reputation is right now though as Amos and mildly aren't exactly pure as the driven snow Themselves they shouldn't throw stones it's very cruel. But once the truth does come out I'm hoping that Dumbledore makes it public say at breakfast and Makes pointed reference to the truest real friends James has not the mean whisperers behind his back But you've written such an extraordinary tough yet Absolutely enthralling beautiful believe able love Story that's growing through friendship under trying Circumstances for a teenager yet it's being faced with Amazing bravery resilience strength beyond measure Amid light hearted moments breaking through a truly Magical unforgettable compassionate well written love Story as a potter head of over twenty years I salute You and say thank you so very Elizabeth skinner. |
![]() ![]() Leave it to a head girl to rudely interrupt what looked Like being their first kiss still at Least there's time Coming up for them as he's becoming so relaxed around Lily though he does love denying it to everyone else but It's lovely to read though it looks like Barty crouch juniors mother was involved with mouldy voldy movement as he became one of them yet lost respect Rather him than anyone uncle Edmund sounds Very interesting actually as it sounds like an arranged Marriage without considering people's feelings for either Of James parents that's terrible I'd love to see James Relaxed and laughing very soon before there's a showdown maybe at madam rosmertas in hogsmeade Could work its magic somehow these two need to Spend more time together without nosy Parkers Hanging around yet this incredibly delightful story Just keeps on getting stronger positive reviews with Each highly regarded fascinating truly inspirational Chapter you've written so very brilliantly with such Clever knowledge of teenage angst it's utterly remarkable in a magically captivating unforgettably Unique well written imaginative way it eclipses every Other one your an absolute genius so thank you Very Elizabeth skinner. |
![]() ![]() I'm glad that James has friends he can trust and is loyal To in return though it would e been great to see that Night talked about plus some yelling to clear the air Though his father definitely has some explaining to do Not only to James but his wife whom is related to the Bones family apparently they will want blood deservedly. However there is so much unspoken angst that any Teenager should carry So these five I'm not counting Pettigrew need to release some tension before words Are said their loyalty kept them together maybe a Quidditch match against hufflepuff not slithering Would do it as some time apart might help but I'm Truly loving this fascinating wondrous up lifting Positively beautiful positive story it's got that X factor That I've only read in this story but it's sad that he Became cynical so young though lily can change that Through her love but I'm hoping you will write sometime Soon maybe a fremione love story which is Fred weasels And hermione as you've brought this couple together In such a heart warming compassionate way you've Been blessed with the art of storytelling so thank you So very muchim very sure you'll get accolades you Elizabeth skinner. |
![]() ![]() I'm loving Sirius revenge on snape as its revenge for The cruel taunting of James whom knew what he was Up to he wasn't a fool though he's acting like one as He seems to have overheard something most hurtful Yet it hasn't been verified by his mother so for now Might be just a vicious rumour hopefully but it's also One of the very best storylines I've ever read plus It's extremely original no one else has gone down This path just the non stop verbal abusive part so Thank you for writing such a very imaginative precise Emotionally powerful deep entertaining colourful Dramatic yet romantic love story full of passion depth Quirkiness lots of fun and hopefully some light hearted Moments to cheer James up but it's uniquely unforgettable I really love this story so thank you Very much .love Elizabeth skinner. |
![]() ![]() Okay I'm curious right now what could be affecting James so badly that other pure blood families know Of that's so terrible if he's related to the bones family I'd be proud they weren't death eaters but strong and Brave very intelligent but now Lily's curious which is Bad for them as her imagination is running into overdrive And her friends are lying to her another no no if your A friend of this proud red haired witch we never forgive Liars and they do have redheads in Italy .this is such An engrossing avidly read fascinating great teenage Angst realistic problems yet colourful people whom Feel compassion and loyalty Its quite amazingly Emotional and brilliantly well written but insightful Plus touching all in all a truly marvellous dramatic Highly energetic wonderful exceptionally descriptive Magically blessed love story which is unforgettable In the most positive ways your sensational .love Elizabeth skinner. |
![]() ![]() I'm absolutely loving everything about this very complex Fascinating love story and the fact their in different years doesn't bother me at all plus I'm liking petunia And vernon congratulations,though Peter is still an Idiot the only thing I have an issue with is frank long bottom marries Alice prewett not Lizzy whatshername Actually this is turning out to be my favourite hilly Romance as it's truly impossible to cease reading which Hasn't happened before yet it's whimsical strong very Interesting magically mystifying highly imaginative Creative enchanting powerful magnificently well written Adventurous crazy fun filled egotistical ways but still Classy outstanding totally unforgettable plus full of Similar weasley twins fantastic humor first rate you Rock so thank you very. Elizabeth skinner. |
![]() ![]() WHY DID YOU KILL LILY |
![]() ![]() Was this the end of the story? And is lily dead? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just thought I should tell you that you've posted this story under the wrong Lily. This Lily is Harry's daughter. |
![]() ![]() Why did you have to make this last chapter so so sad? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading this story! I just re-read it and it was a nice read to take a break form finals with. I like how James grew because of Lily and learned to love. I do wish he had a bit more Morse and didn't show his emotions as much. However wonderfully written story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... HOW DARE YOU! Ahhh. Just kidding. That was amazing... And a vr |