Reviews for When Dawn Breaks The Night
Fred's fanatic chapter 9 . 4/8/2018
Neither Sirius or Peter know anything about mugged so
He should've ignored them plus decorating the tree and
House is such great fun singing carols all he needs to
Do is relax and chill out forget meeting his father and
Be his charming self after an petunias
Quite lovely now it's refreshing to see but his father
Sounds very similar to lucius Malloy cold bloodedly
Ruthless and uncaring poor James he's got it tough
Yet Lily's brightening his dreary life with her laughter
Smiles friendship protection I'd love to see him give
His first really great belly laugh it could work wonders
As a relaxant it's the greatest her
Mother can understand his nervousness since apart
From his close friends Lily's his only female friend
I'm very excited by how your magnificent thrilling
Quirky sarcastic beautiful zany touching complex
Discerning honest forthright adventurous challenging
Paradoxical love story is creating an utterly unique
Journey which I'm loving going on its incredibly
Delightful loads of fun highly interesting bewitching
Remarkable in every way yet the wonderful angst
Comes through among excellent well written sentences
Filled with imagination power unforgettable greatness
It's wicked plus you're a genius so thank you so very
Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 8 . 4/8/2018
Oh that's sweet James is trying so hard to make a good
Impression but he doesn't know that in the muggle
World we usually freeze to death unless your lucky
To live somewhere sunny,but Millie's starting to really
Get on my nerves similar to crazed bellatrix it's not
James fault so if she could lose the mouthy spoils
Bratty attitude or she will lose Lily's friendship .but it
Will be fine away from his parents he can laugh,sing
And enjoy his first real Christmas which is a must for
Everyone actually the main reason this has become
My favourite jilly romance is that there's no nastiness
In it yes they have the usual angst yet they're becoming
Friends with lots of exciting dramatic tension added and
You have brought a fresh spin on it congratulations this
Is utterly brilliant classy amidst great friendship but on
The other hand there's extreme challenges to be faced
And plenty of very amusing phrases making it totally
Captivating enthralling sensitive unique plus unforgettable in such a magically wondrous creative
Way from you a truly imaginative writer thank you
So very Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 7 . 4/8/2018
I noticed one tiny mistake in this chapter Sirius had. A
Younger brother called regulus. Black he loathed as he
Chose not to be in gryffindor plus he hated his parents
So he wouldn't have gone back there, and I just love
Christmas it's truly wonderful but hog warts is great at
Xmas but lily has a truly sneaky plan up her sleeve though she will need some help from Remus and Sirius
To get James on board he's very disillusioned yet trying
Hard to be his usually bright happy self it's sad but he
Will survive this in true gryffindor something very exciting happening between these two
It's beautiful to read about them being friends first and
You really do have a gift for writing this genre it just
Shines through golden as the sun yet there's high drama
Adding to more marvellous brilliant storylines from you
I'm totally stunned by the outrageously bewitching plot
Lines that are extremely. Fascinating puzzling while being compassionate also but it might be time for some
Uninterrupted romantic moments to come for lily and
James soon after all it's Christmas time when miracles
Occur but once again thank you so very much for this
Unforgettable love story with a unique
Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 6 . 4/7/2018
I'm not certain why she didn't go but there's nothing
Wrong with it and if other people want to cause trouble
Then let them hopefully they can get past this road hump with out to much yelling which would please
Mildly Amos and Severus but it would turn James darker
Than his supposed reputation is right now though as
Amos and mildly aren't exactly pure as the driven snow
Themselves they shouldn't throw stones it's very cruel.
But once the truth does come out I'm hoping that
Dumbledore makes it public say at breakfast and
Makes pointed reference to the truest real friends
James has not the mean whisperers behind his back
But you've written such an extraordinary tough yet
Absolutely enthralling beautiful believe able love
Story that's growing through friendship under trying
Circumstances for a teenager yet it's being faced with
Amazing bravery resilience strength beyond measure
Amid light hearted moments breaking through a truly
Magical unforgettable compassionate well written love
Story as a potter head of over twenty years I salute
You and say thank you so very Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 5 . 4/7/2018
Leave it to a head girl to rudely interrupt what looked
Like being their first kiss still at Least there's time
Coming up for them as he's becoming so relaxed around
Lily though he does love denying it to everyone else but
It's lovely to read though it looks like Barty crouch juniors mother was involved with mouldy voldy movement as he became one of them yet lost respect
Rather him than anyone uncle Edmund sounds
Very interesting actually as it sounds like an arranged
Marriage without considering people's feelings for either
Of James parents that's terrible I'd love to see James
Relaxed and laughing very soon before there's a showdown maybe at madam rosmertas in hogsmeade
Could work its magic somehow these two need to
Spend more time together without nosy Parkers
Hanging around yet this incredibly delightful story
Just keeps on getting stronger positive reviews with
Each highly regarded fascinating truly inspirational
Chapter you've written so very brilliantly with such
Clever knowledge of teenage angst it's utterly remarkable in a magically captivating unforgettably
Unique well written imaginative way it eclipses every
Other one your an absolute genius so thank you
Very Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 4 . 4/7/2018
I'm glad that James has friends he can trust and is loyal
To in return though it would e been great to see that
Night talked about plus some yelling to clear the air
Though his father definitely has some explaining to do
Not only to James but his wife whom is related to the
Bones family apparently they will want blood deservedly.
However there is so much unspoken angst that any
Teenager should carry So these five I'm not counting
Pettigrew need to release some tension before words
Are said their loyalty kept them together maybe a
Quidditch match against hufflepuff not slithering
Would do it as some time apart might help but I'm
Truly loving this fascinating wondrous up lifting
Positively beautiful positive story it's got that X factor
That I've only read in this story but it's sad that he
Became cynical so young though lily can change that
Through her love but I'm hoping you will write sometime
Soon maybe a fremione love story which is Fred weasels
And hermione as you've brought this couple together
In such a heart warming compassionate way you've
Been blessed with the art of storytelling so thank you
So very muchim very sure you'll get accolades you
Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 3 . 4/7/2018
I'm loving Sirius revenge on snape as its revenge for
The cruel taunting of James whom knew what he was
Up to he wasn't a fool though he's acting like one as
He seems to have overheard something most hurtful
Yet it hasn't been verified by his mother so for now
Might be just a vicious rumour hopefully but it's also
One of the very best storylines I've ever read plus
It's extremely original no one else has gone down
This path just the non stop verbal abusive part so
Thank you for writing such a very imaginative precise
Emotionally powerful deep entertaining colourful
Dramatic yet romantic love story full of passion depth
Quirkiness lots of fun and hopefully some light hearted
Moments to cheer James up but it's uniquely unforgettable I really love this story so thank you
Very much .love Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 2 . 4/7/2018
Okay I'm curious right now what could be affecting James so badly that other pure blood families know
Of that's so terrible if he's related to the bones family
I'd be proud they weren't death eaters but strong and
Brave very intelligent but now Lily's curious which is
Bad for them as her imagination is running into overdrive
And her friends are lying to her another no no if your
A friend of this proud red haired witch we never forgive
Liars and they do have redheads in Italy .this is such
An engrossing avidly read fascinating great teenage
Angst realistic problems yet colourful people whom
Feel compassion and loyalty Its quite amazingly
Emotional and brilliantly well written but insightful
Plus touching all in all a truly marvellous dramatic
Highly energetic wonderful exceptionally descriptive
Magically blessed love story which is unforgettable
In the most positive ways your sensational .love
Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 1 . 4/7/2018
I'm absolutely loving everything about this very complex
Fascinating love story and the fact their in different years doesn't bother me at all plus I'm liking petunia
And vernon congratulations,though Peter is still an
Idiot the only thing I have an issue with is frank long bottom marries Alice prewett not Lizzy whatshername
Actually this is turning out to be my favourite hilly
Romance as it's truly impossible to cease reading which
Hasn't happened before yet it's whimsical strong very
Interesting magically mystifying highly imaginative
Creative enchanting powerful magnificently well written
Adventurous crazy fun filled egotistical ways but still
Classy outstanding totally unforgettable plus full of
Similar weasley twins fantastic humor first rate you
Rock so thank you very. Elizabeth skinner.
Guest chapter 35 . 11/23/2016
Guest chapter 35 . 11/7/2012
Was this the end of the story? And is lily dead?
Shira Lansys chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Just thought I should tell you that you've posted this story under the wrong Lily. This Lily is Harry's daughter.
WHY chapter 35 . 6/24/2012
Why did you have to make this last chapter so so sad?
Akt5us chapter 35 . 6/12/2012
I really enjoyed reading this story! I just re-read it and it was a nice read to take a break form finals with. I like how James grew because of Lily and learned to love. I do wish he had a bit more Morse and didn't show his emotions as much. However wonderfully written story! :)
KaitlinM17 chapter 35 . 10/23/2011
... HOW DARE YOU! Ahhh. Just kidding.

That was amazing... And a vr
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