Reviews for A Second Chance
Aus the scaled warlock chapter 24 . 2/18
wooo
Qorianth Grindelwald chapter 25 . 2/16
This book is amazing I hope that there is a second!
Shelleykids chapter 25 . 2/15
? that tells me nothing
Firedragon99 chapter 25 . 2/13
When is the sequel?
Genuka chapter 5 . 2/13
Yeah, this one - Chapter 5 - needs clean up too. Its more like a block of coding than a chapter...
Genuka chapter 2 . 2/13
Chapter 2 really needs the formatting fixed. Its practically all coding and most people wont slog through it.
DaughterOfPoseidon-HorseLover chapter 5 . 2/13
chapter 5 also looks like code
DaughterOfPoseidon-HorseLover chapter 2 . 2/13
I just wanted to say that chapter 2 not readable due to its kind of looking like code.
arielalfie199 chapter 25 . 1/30
Más quiero mas de esto xfa. La narrativa es buena pero hay veces en las que cuenta todo un poquito apresurado, y el último detalle es que me gustaría ver más la participación de cerberus y a syrius. Aparte de esos temas me pareció una muy buena historia que se puede explotar mas
Accio Allsorts chapter 2 . 1/23
I am liking the look of this fic, but you could do with more punctuation to break up your sentences a little bit.
rowenasheir chapter 10 . 1/15
attack one of Morgoth's foul beasts or rathe attract one of Morgoth's foul beasts?
Lord Damon Darkfyre chapter 25 . 12/24/2019
Definitely flows better than your other story, but could stand to be slowed down a bit, as well as improvements made to flow and structure. Same advice and points as my review to your other fic, actually. Again, read other stories to improve your writing and to help find your own style. Enjoy the holidays, and stay safe!
Lady Salazar Slytherine chapter 1 . 12/6/2019
Love the well constructed beginning.
Lady Salazar Slytherine chapter 25 . 12/6/2019
i loved this story so much that I can't wait for book 2
Hadrian Eveningshade chapter 1 . 12/6/2019
Interesting.. But the begining id very rough, hard..
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