Reviews for Star Effect
pittsacee chapter 8 . 6/30
I do hope the story is continued
Monster King chapter 8 . 5/26
DebaterMax chapter 1 . 4/25
Isnt a cycle 50k years not 10k?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31
Guest chapter 2 . 3/31
scyfly chapter 8 . 3/17
damn you pulled in the biggest issue i have with the force, this being the ever lasting fight between the light and dark side. i hate it because it is so damn simplistic that only childeren see the world so black and white and the idea that the force itself is alive and influences its ppl seems just so damn retarted. the force is a curse which was the driving power behind every major conflict in star wars, hell it even destroyed the whole civilisation before them. how would anyone want to touch this?

anyways, the reapers and the dozen of other problems the citadel has seems more then enough for me without the sith adding to it.
scyfly chapter 6 . 3/17
this is an interesting idea but not one im to fond of. would such a pacifistic approach work? maybe but it would take a very long time and effort, effort that could be better spend on preparing for war. i prefer the stories that just subvert the council through gaining an alliance with the quarrians krogan and geth while conquering the batatians. this would force the rest of the council to follow or stay behind.

all this talk and no action is just a little boring to me
scyfly chapter 3 . 3/16
a blaster rifle would be stopped by a kinetic shield yes but the heath will bleed through and boil the ones inside
scyfly chapter 2 . 3/16
who the hell informs an new race how many ships they have.

there is a lot wrong with this chapter, from how the turians react to the batarians and turians ariving so close after on another and many other small details.

it seems you are trying really hard to be all friendly with the citadel, too hard to be logical
scyfly chapter 1 . 3/16
you often fail to properly point out a shift in pov which gets rather confusing.

the batatian second wave came way to fast
scyfly chapter 1 . 3/16
it is odd that the humans didnt develop better shields against kinetic weapons. they had a warning from the proteans that an eezo enemy wiped them out so it would be logical to work up a defence. and just because you dont use eezo doesnt mean you dont research it, who knows what kind of benifits it has. for example relays, though i would never use the exsisting one, making your own seems like very economic idea for fast travel.

to bad about involving the force though, the force is in everything so i find it hard to believe the other races didnt discover this.
Chryseum chapter 1 . 2/15
This final part feels so forced, they happened to track someone travelling in hyperspace the first time they meet and then they happen to have a mass relay there. Not to mention the scavenger crafts left behind to be tracked... I guess you really wanted an excuse for the Humans to have a difficult fight even with all their advantages that you make all the luck go towards the Batarians.
Dasgun chapter 1 . 2/12
jnautking chapter 8 . 1/13
I would love to see this continue
evattude chapter 8 . 12/21/2020
Great chapter!
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