Reviews for Star Effect
evattude chapter 8 . 12/21/2020
Great chapter!
BrightSkywalker chapter 8 . 12/15/2020
This was such a fun ride so far!

Looking forward to more!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2020
FUCKING TRASH FANFIC
philmeyering chapter 4 . 12/7/2020
I stopped reading when the Author decided Humans were pushovers... The Author also Starts to nerf the Alliance to make the Council look less wimpy. Why do fanfiction Author's always bend over backwards for the Council . I rarely ever find any good crossover fanfictions with a Human Alliance with some self respect
Mastersgtjames chapter 4 . 11/30/2020
I feel like the alliance's ships & stations should not have damaged... I mean, this is the FUTURE of the star wars tech. So, either Quantum-Crystalline Armor. OR, something even better.
Aside from that, they should have all that SUPER advanced medical tech. Including clone and genetic resequencing tech. Immortality, or at least eternal youth, should be easily in reach. I mean, it was danced around in Star Wars. Like a pink elephant, it was right there, easily obtained, yet never pursued.

Not a fan of them going to the council as a Supplicant in any way. Also don't get why they have not ALREADY sent ships and colonies to other galaxies.

Should really have Waaay more ships like th Avalon. That should be the standard size. difficult as it may be. Definitely should maybe make some space stations(death Stars) that are focused on anti-ship and made to be defensive.
YOURLORDANDMASTEROFINTERESTING chapter 8 . 11/22/2020
interesting
Silverwingzz chapter 3 . 11/17/2020
Cerberus wasn’t founded until after the first contact war, for you to already have them makes no sense to me.
Daedleuss chapter 8 . 10/15/2020
Excellent story keep it up!
intata chapter 3 . 9/18/2020
Little confused here.
You said something about the Star Wars tech being better with shields when they were having the space battle, right? Like the Giant Mass Effect weapons didn't do much damage to them. Yet the Mass Effect shields are better when it comes to personal shields? Why not just use droideka shields?

Fun story, thanks for writing!
dveth chapter 1 . 8/17/2020
A lot more care needs to be put into this story before it's good. Proofreading and editing would be very helpful to get rid of the errors and make it better to read.

In terms of plot, the huge infodump the humans gave the Asari upon their first meeting is incredibly unrealistic. There are far more important things to discuss upon first contact, especially when they met in the middle of a battle. Some Asari probably died while waiting for medical treatment while the Asari leaders wasted time discussing irrelevant things. Also, giving the Asari such specific information about humanity's past is pointless when they don't know anything in general. There are far more relevant things to discuss, like whether or not the Alliance are currently in a war, how long the Asari want to stay, what needs to be done to get them space-capable again, whether or not other Asari will follow them through the relay, and how to contact the rest of their species.

This is not a great chapter, and the problems with the story so far are fundamental enough that they likely persist throughout. I don't recommend this.
Daedleuss chapter 1 . 7/22/2020
Is there any chance that you will continue with this is good read and a great plot line., Please continue this
MystiYew chapter 1 . 7/10/2020
Needs a proof read and improved dialogue.
EvilTheLast chapter 8 . 6/29/2020
Good update.
MarauderPrime12 chapter 8 . 6/29/2020
The sith make an appearance
Greatazuredragon chapter 8 . 6/29/2020
Nice work, keep it up.
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