Reviews for One problem at a time, please
walmar chapter 19 . 7/27/2020
Just finished last chapter, very interesting take on TAG, but you got me hooked, looking forward to more updates
mary.okeeffe.16 chapter 1 . 4/3/2020
Cool
Your Brother chapter 19 . 3/1/2020
When will you finish it?

Joshua.
Bow Echo chapter 19 . 5/23/2019
Happy Birthday! 18 is certainly a distant memory for me!
Well I wanted to see what went wrong for 'the three' and some of the answers are certainly here, beautifully tying to earlier chapters. Lucy is an enigma indeed, is her death a story of her own creation so she can take a new, more fulfiling life away from Jeff? But too leave those boys behind?! Coerced ... ? The answers to previous questions just pose more ...fantastic writing! Looking forward to the next.
Have a great time celebrating your milestone. X
Math Girl chapter 19 . 5/23/2019
Happy Birthday, Shadow! One more trip around the Sun! :) I started writing around 12 years of age, but had need making up stories for as long as I could speak.

Will you be featuring Lucy's past? How she came to turn on Jeff in this manner? Was she taking her émotions all along, or did something happen? Can't wait to find out.

Christine
High King Peter the Magnificen chapter 18 . 3/18/2019
Oh, dear...
Bow Echo chapter 18 . 3/18/2019
Still here! And, I enjoyed this chapter, set up some interesting angles. Looking forward to seeing what went wrong for the three. X
Math Girl chapter 18 . 3/18/2019
Still looking forward to more of Lucy. :)
Short, but important chapter, setting things up.

C.
Susan Popplewell chapter 17 . 2/6/2019
Great chapter. Love how Kayo tricked the Hood into revealing stuff. Looking forward to more.
Bow Echo chapter 17 . 2/6/2019
Intriguing update. Looking forward to the Lucy reveal and Kayo's return to her brothers.
High King Peter the Magnificen chapter 17 . 2/5/2019
Very interesting. Can't wait to learn more.
Math Girl chapter 17 . 2/5/2019
Look forward to more of Lucy. :) Glad Kayo foiled his plan!

C.
Guest chapter 14 . 1/13/2019
interesting. So, Jones is out of there to get help. So there's water coming of the wall?

Joshua.
anonymous chapter 16 . 12/30/2018
very clever
Math Girl chapter 16 . 12/21/2018
Lucy's alive? The boys will be delighted! Confused, too, but that's easily handled, once they've got Mum back. :)
Fun chapter, Shadow!

Christine
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