Brilliant story

This is what i call masterpiece, my only turnoff is that there is not more of it like an after story...

Will check your profile to see if you continued this!

Glorious fic

Oof, I wonder how long until [SELF] comes calling.

100 billion tons of oof

Neuter sold something she could make billions on for some p****. My man!

Doesn't piggot understand that she's creating the things she's afraid of here?

Awesome story, awesome ending. Guess this puny meatsack wouldn't have understood any followups with the hive mother or even Dragon/Taylor anyway, so, just the right point to end this story. Interactions between Amy and her father have been described elsewhere. Nice, and many thanks!

Oh God, she inadvertentlhy let one of her targets know that she knows T.T

It was a very good story, but it started becoming pretty boring in the last chapters due to the constant back-to-back interlude chapters. It makes sense to do such a thing for an epilogue, to show the aftermath of the climax of the story, but this wasn't the epilogue after the climax of the story-it /was/ the climax of the story. What was supposed to be the most exciting part of the story became the most boring part of the story because you decided to drag it out and write the (not really needed) perspectives of people we are much less invested and interested in than the main character.

The amount of chapters from alternate POVs is starting to get pretty grating at this point. I'm starting to doubt we'll ever actually see Birdcaged-Taylor's POV ever again in the rest of what's left of this fic.

...I honestly feel bad for any Endbringer that would attack Brockton now. Especially if this stays true to canon.

Damn. The story just... Kind of ends there, huh?
This was an amazing story. I'd have liked to see more of Taylor's possible ideas be put into action. More hivemind stuff. She lived, but her original mind, her original body, died as far as I can tell. Her and Dragon will keep each other in check. The Earth will heal under their watchful guidance. Humanity will move on. And Cauldron, the core members of Cauldron, have been left to face the consequences of their own actions.

It felt like kind of a jarring ending, the last chapter. I enjoyed the story though.

She did not! She didn't! She just connected Scion to the original hivemind, didn't she?! Clever girl...

Fractals are purdy, that's why.
Queen Taylor has moved up in the world in many ways.