I dont really like this suicidal BS from MC. She is actively looking for something that can kill her. Like dude... you'd have to be mentally challenged to do that.

I guess it speaks a lot about why this fic was dropped.

Legend says "Not if you make yourself no longer worth saving."
That only applies to Cauldron. No matter what They do, the rest of humanity does not share in their sins. So, I'm honestly on Doctor Mother's side in this; when Everything is at stake, Anything is valid to save us all. The ones doing the things might deserve a bullet to the skull afterwards, but if it saves so many it is still worth doing.

The ending is kind of abrupt and slightly disappointing but overall fun story 7.5/10

Got disappointed when i saw it was ending so soon, but I love the ending.

thanks for the story, it made for a fun read :)
would've loved an epilogue as the ending felt somewhat abrupt, but it works as is.
thanks for sharing & all the best to you and yours!
(p.s. Harry Potter, Squatter is great, isn't it. :) )

i cant say i like this style of writing. It's more so a sequence of events being narrated than a story about taylor.
It feels more like a diary or recalling of events than a story, its only documenting events and thoughts, where a story would show taylor going to school, describe the surroundings, sounds, how her shoes made a slapping sound everytime they hit the schoolfloor. so far there hasnt been any of this, it feels very impersonal and i cant really connect to taylor as a character.

i want to hear how taylor reacts at going back to school, to see her slowly overcome her woes, to see her realise how insignificant her bulies are now that she isnt a powerless teenager, i want to see her change from a hopeless bullied teen, with a chip on her shoulder into the powerful queen of a hice mind and a superhero.
as the reader i want to be able to put my feet into her shoes as i read, i want a to know what it would be like to be taylor in the flesh, not to hear about it from another perspective.

I enjoyed this story very much. The chapters nearing the end felt rushed, regardless, it was an entertaining read.

The end is near! Wheeee!

Muahahahahaha!

Wheeheehee! Good stuff.

Almost there…

Good stuff.

RIP Leviathan.

Rude.

Well, guess he’s dead.