|Reviews for Interlude|
| Falco Player chapter 1 . 10/25/2019
I'm so excited just to see some Sin and Punishment fanfiction, there isn't any on Archive of Our Own so I thought I was out of luck. The contemplative mood here is really good and expands on the plot of the game in a way that makes sense, I hadn't thought about the fact that Saki and Airan have probably experienced a lot of loss due to the backstory of the game. It adds a lot of nuance to their characters.
Your english is good, just one thing that stood out to me is that when you have a new speaker there should be a break in the text. The dialogue at the end was hard to follow for me because of that.
| Oddnetwork chapter 1 . 3/16/2019
It's about time somebody posted a good story in the Sin and Punishment section!
(English isn't my first language either, so I can sort of sympathize with you?)