Reviews for Leader of the Pride by MarieCarro
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2018
It sounded quite ridiculous when you said that they had "FINIALLY" been rescued...after five days. "Finally" suggests a long while, ya know?
Maggie Davis chapter 1 . 8/8/2018
Very good story. I really loved reading it. Is there more?
SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 7/29/2018
Wonderful heartfelt story! I hate that the poachers killed the lion, but know they don’t have long to continue living with Bella after them.
midnitereader chapter 1 . 7/29/2018
This was so fascinating the way Bella worked with these lions. Tragic that the future of the pride, Abayomi, was gunned down like that.
SarcasticBimbo chapter 1 . 7/29/2018
Thank you for entering the contest. Good luck. :-)
jen5795 chapter 1 . 7/28/2018
That was really good, different but definitely good. I'd love to see where this goes from here.
tawelephant chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 7/25/2018
Wow! This was freaking amazing! Thank you for writing and sharing!
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 7/25/2018
Good luck in the contest.
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 7/25/2018
I loved it and I cried at the end
debslmac chapter 1 . 7/25/2018
Loved this even though it was a sad ending. I hope this will be continued
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 7/25/2018
Oh no! Sad ending. I hope they catch the poachers.
Rita01tx chapter 1 . 7/25/2018
Poachers are the vilest of the vile and I feel Bella's rage to make them pay! Sure hope this continues after the contest!
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 7/24/2018
What a great story.
grandmachix chapter 1 . 7/24/2018
Please say this will become chapter one of a longer story. They new king of the tribe is dead. Will they accept leadership from one of the older males or will they fall back on Bella?
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