Reviews for Breaking Point
iMTheStormKing chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
Nice start to the fic. Hope you update again soon.
Dumbledork chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
Big flaw in the story. The Ministry of Magic can detect wandless magic as was proven in "Chamber of Secrets" when Dobby used magic in Harry's bedroom and he got a warning from the Ministry.
Gold chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
Good chapter.
DireWolf96 chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
Would be great to see Fleur struggle to choose between Bill and Harry...
Uzu chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
I would definitely like to see Daphne added, whit her sister Astoria or her friend Tracey Davis.
kent-jensen chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
more plz
Nitewolf423 chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
I see what you did there. Got a little avatar bending action as far as elements go eh?
Tobi99 chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
Let Daphne be in the Harem
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
Awesome i likd the start of this and harry on track to getting more educated and advanced with his magic and looking out for his personal well being.. my vote is for only fleur and dora in the pairing but daphne could be a useful addition having access to slytherin and being at school while the other two girls are working/ not in harrys classes
QinQun chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
I would definitely like to see Daphne added, it's one of my favorite pairings. Another possible option... perhaps Susan Bones or Tracey Davis.
German Bear chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
I would say Susan Bones
hellfire45 chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and it is interesting how Remus says that they are there for him when they haven’t been responding to his letters
Shadowdragondanny chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
Like it can’t wait for more
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
Luna gabriella
Ronin Kenshin chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
great start good work
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