Excalibro emo has arrived

I really like your chapter names...

is that a jojo reference ?

I have been waiting for a bnha x warframe fanfic for ages. and thus fic, exactly delivers what I exactly want. I want to commend you for doing a really amazing job for writing this. I'm looking forward for Izuku to transfer into Umbra

Cool, is Excalibur your favorite frame? Or did you pick Umbra since the plot you can build with it?

What are deku’s abilities again?

Two things bother me a ton about this fic...

1. Current day Warframes aren't sentient. They definitely were when they were first produced, as Rhino Prime's Codex describes a Protoframe going on a mass slaughter and eating people, but not now. According to Ordis, they're combat proxies for the Tenno to do battle in *without any memories*, Umbra being the only exception known so far because Ballas was a major dick. If they were alive, we'd have been getting memory melds since The Second Dream and The War Within. Also, during The Second Dream, the only reason our frame moves at all is because we pumped Void energy through it. So seeing Revenant move on his own is... Weird.

2. Umbra was *not* the first Warframe. He was transformed into a "Vessel for the Tenno" by Ballas out of spite, while the Old War was still going on. Transference started out as a therapy designed by Real Space Mom for the Tenno to not corrupt everything they came across with their "devilry", and was later turned into a weapon by the Orokin. If anything, Umbra was one of the last designed before the Golden Dicks were slaughtered.

All in all, this story's great. But, little bumps and gaps here and there leave me feeling a bit... Numb, I guess is the word. 8/10, hope you come back soon man.

I must admit, I have reread up to this point twice now, and I love this doc, I hope you come back soon.

I've just realised that you're manhunt the chapters after Warframe mods

Oh oh oh I just realized something! I think fumikage might play an essential role soon

I was kind of expecting izu to get himself maybe a war frame weapon and a set of armor that is warframe related not just powers but maybe he does idk this early

Plz contiue this if you have a time but if you busy then it ok but try to at least update once in a while it a good story and unique one in a good way in

Great CHapter!

Love the chapter!

Awesome beginning!